Loved it, excellent work!

Darling, you have no idea how good you are in this! You should keep on writting! :-)

And what about a sequel? ;-)

i have read ur story aa the way throuh...i loved it...maybe a sequel?i haven't been abld to r&r..because the internet and my computer have benn acting up...but i really did like the story

:)

Oh, that was wonderful *wipe the tear out of the corner of my eye*. And she can, of course, come to visit her family whenever she wants since she is now the happy Queen. Nad her wonderful, loved, and loving King will come with her.

Man, I hate it when really good stories end- so tell me, have you written any other stories I can get completely hooked on?

Yay!

Agh! So many answers and yet not enough. I love that she's finally realized that she loves him, and I love how well-suited they are for each other. The Labyrinth and everyone else loves her too- sigh :) I can't wait to see what you do next. And I want to read them truly tell each other their hearts, and I was hoping for more than just one chapter where they're happy and in love and together, but now I've only got 2 more chapters left. I hope the next two chapters are incredibly long so that everything they should do is done.

Okay, I'm rather confused in a slightly-less-than-thoroughly-confused sort of way. I hope the next chapter is easier to understand. I do like how you went back and changed previous experiences by adding her heart and feelings to it- it's as though her heart was trapped in the mirror (like I questioned earlier) but was still able to feel what it would have if it had been within her. And now she's able to look back at those memories with the eyes of her heart affecting how she sees them.

And, oh yeah, Midnight Sun- absolutely scrumptious. 260 pages of yumminess.

I like that they haven't forgotten her but feel like she's always around them and are comfortable with that. I like that she's forgotten who I think must have been Josh- why is he still around them? I love Jareth and how he's trying to let her be free. I really liked that the Labyrinth has chosen her, and that Jareth hopes they can rule equally side-by-side.

Good chapter. I can't wait to read what he's figured out and how he's going to fix everything.

Interesting chapter. I wonder what the pieces of her are- I'm thinking they kept her heart, which is why she's unable to love. I hope the water isn't a trick of the Labyrinth, or rather that the Labyrinth hasn't decided to try to kill her or Jareth. It would, however, be incredible if he were to join her.

Breaking Dawn, huh. I LOVE the Twilight novels- which camp were/are you in- Edward or Jacob?

That was intense and harsh. Poor Jareth. Poor Sarah. More poor Jareth, though.

I do have one suggestion and that is to be more careful with spelling & grammar- sometimes I find myself having to decipher what you probably meant to write instead of being able to be swept away into the story. It kind of makes the story disjointed. I still love it, but I can't get into it as much as I'd like.

Yay!

Oh, that was so sweet. About time she was nice to him. I like that he gave her what he knew she wanted without fighting it anymore. I hope they begin to get along and she starts seeing him even better.

Another good chapter. I like how he finally told her that she was wrong to see him like she does. I liked the scene with her friends, but I can't wait to read when she finally opens her eyes to the real him. I wonder if she'll still be trapped when this is all said and done or if he'll let her go visit her family, and I wonder why Josh isn't supposed to remember her anymore (when he supposedly loved her) and I wonder if Toby will still be down there or if Jareth's love for Sarah will help him find a way (and a reason) to free him or if Toby will go back up so that he could grow up and then come back down to be the heir when he was older.

Oh! I LOVED it. The way she blew up at him was perfect, and I can't help but adore him when he's jealous. I so very much hope that you put in his thoughts on this whole altercation in the next chapter.