Reviews for Reforging The Past
qqchurch chapter 11 . 4/23/2011
Five cannibalistic succubi turned humans versus Team Eight. Damn, that sounds both exciting and scary at the same time. If they fight, the possibilities of someone getting injured in Team Eight and then being mobbed by the Succubi are scary. But, then, Naruto has the Kyuubi in him and if anything happens to Hinata, he would probably go berserk and release some of her chakra or a mix of his and Kyuubi's, which may scare the cannibals into submission.

Other than that, it's awesome!

Eagerly anticipating the next Monster-length update,

Heavywolfblade chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
cool story love the concept especially love the omake at the end
dragon823 chapter 11 . 4/22/2011
awsome story you have going here, this will be the fourth time-travel story i have read. the butterfly effect is rarely used in those stories. the only one to use this concept was For the Love of my Friends by Foxie-sama. i look forward to what this story will show.
Sakaba chapter 10 . 4/21/2011
Man you write long chapters! These things are longer than most fics all together! I just wanted to review and say I like how you're dealing with the more psychological aspect of Hinata manipulating (or whatever word you want to use) Ino.

Oh, and to recomend against use banana, or any phalically shaped fruit, as a saftey word. Saying "I'll be right back to get the banana" means all of a sudden I we have to stop. Old Gaurd wisdom.
Fox-Sama chapter 11 . 4/20/2011
Love the story. your doing a great job, you have long chapters witch is something that is getting hard to fine now a days. please keep up the great work
Deathmvp chapter 11 . 4/20/2011
Great job and welcome back to this story. I do feel bad for Sakura though in this chapter as her mom is messing he up even more.
hhrforeverhhr chapter 11 . 4/20/2011
love the extra extra long chapters. awesome story, i can't wait for more!
Inzaneamaru chapter 11 . 4/20/2011
Simply remarkable, I love this story! its just like reading a book, Great work! PS what about your other Naru Hina stories? when will we see them updated? Im definitely willing to wait a bit.
Rio-Vena chapter 11 . 4/20/2011
holy cow! A brick (if you don't know what that is search around for brick joke)

another great chapter! your the first author who actually has great charcter development in a time travel be careful naruto is slowly becoming a marry is need for any more powerups

references from The Princess Bride and twilight made me LOL

your not a twilight fan huh? never mind vampires should NOT sparkle

Naruto never seems have a normal mission...

*praying inner sakura gets released and hits (or does something worse) sasuke*

YAY kyubi is awake

Five demon girls...warning sensors indecate that some thing Epic is approacing...

looking forward for next chapter!
hyuugalove001 chapter 11 . 4/19/2011
wow.. what a jerk person. i totally support you :) and glad that you pointed out their wrong!

anyway, the story. AWESOME! i feel like i caught two movie references though. The Princess Bride for the Caves of Despair (i think.. bad memory) and Green as the innocent scared girl catching her prey in Let Me In. :) idk if you were going for that but lightning sand is pretty original from that movie.

I really love how you build up the story too. You throw in random tidbits that don't seem so random but they come back around and actually make sense. I can't wait for your next update!
DreamsRMyLife chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
DEFINITELY interesting. I like foxy Hinata. And including Ino into the group with Anko and Kurenai is great. Naruto's going to be the envy of his classmates though, surrounded by girls haha.

The one thing I don't get is why there is ZERO reaction to Naruto's introduction ("Uzumaki NAMIKAZE Naruto") and Hinata's words ("father's inheritance"). As far as people know he's a clanless orphan...and really, they should all know the Fourth Hokage's name.
DreamsRMyLife chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Well, based on the first chapter I like this story so far. It looks like there will be good humour along with some interesting developments. There was just one thing that kind of glared out at me: Kyuubi's orders.

"You may not harm anyone within Konoha..." This means Kyuubi can't attack ANYONE, including ENEMIES, as long as they are in Konohagakure. Not sure if this was intentional or not though in terms of plot...
TSFreedom chapter 11 . 4/19/2011
Disturbing but awesome chapter. Keep up the great work.
TSFreedom chapter 10 . 4/19/2011
Awesome chapter.
fanficreader71 chapter 11 . 4/19/2011
Great chapter, I will be looking foward to your next update. As always this chapter was very well written and flowed very well for me when reading it. As I said I will be looking foward to reading your next update and thank you for taking the time to write this story.
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