|Reviews for Refuge|
| PSW chapter 1 . 2/8
This was really great - a very good story, in both parts. Thanks for writing!
| MCH chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Great story and loved the way Aslan came to help him and then Petr comes to find him and start to rebuild their relationship.
| Queen Edmund Pevensie chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
| Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
| zephyr hb chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
I like your way of write the emotions of the characters, sweet and calm
| croll chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I know this is old, but with Voyage of the Dawn Treader coming out I couldn't help, but read some Narnia fanfiction. I just wanted to say that this is brilliant, and worded beautifully. I admire it very much. You should definitely do some Voyage fanfic once it comes out, I think we would all appreciate that.
| AliuIce0814 chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
As usual, you characterized the brotherly interaction perfectly.
As for Aslan, I have no idea how you translated the feelings of wonder, awe, and warm fuzzies I get at Church to the Lion, but this is probably the best portrayal of the King of Kings I have ever read. Edmund's fascination with untangling the burr from the Lion's mane was almost symbolic. I loved it.
| Sparky Dorian chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Oh, that was awesome! :) The emotion felt so real, and the way they talked was so... natural. Great work, as always.
| LadyoftheShield chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Sigh. So beautiful!
| franciscangypsy chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
I really enjoyed this story. I felt like you really grasped the characters' voices.
| doewe chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
| Destiny JoRayne Adams chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Very nice. I loved how you built up on the relationship between the two. It was great. I also love the detail you put in here. It was great. Look forward to seeing and/or reading more of you in the future.
Once again, great job!
| LunaNigra chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
| Bridget Vreeland 1 chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
| Sarai chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
I love it!