Reviews for Rivulet Of Ages
Alex2909 chapter 1 . 1/12
love the pairing
zackie1987 chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
I love this stoory
Exiled Soul Nomad chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Nice work on the creativity. You didn't use the same cause but you managed to maintain the result. Nice thinking.
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Awesome story
Richy1991 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
great story
Panther-Freedom02 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
this is a good story maybe you can try a Shinji/Ritsuko/Misato/Maya one-shot and make it very sexy.
Fayneir chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Awesome! My favourite NGE pairing (besides Shinji/Misato.
Andrea Ye chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
haha first Evangelion fanfiction that I am reading and I really liked it... I never thought about this pair...

Alpha Taco chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Well done! Generally, I'm not the biggest fan of lemons. But, this was an amazing story. Here's a play-by-play of what I was thinking during this.


Nice coverup.

Oh boy, I know what's going to happen.

That's ridiculous...

No, nononononono...


Misato, you pervert!

Ritsuko. You could have been nicer.

The hell...

Shinji, you...Oh, I don't know what to say!



Won't someone notice if you're screaming?

Thank you for asking permission.

Ritsuko...Is that honestly the only thing that you're thinking of?


(Angry/shocked/what the just happened look on my face)

Poor penpen.

Oh , did shinji revert to his normal age?

Good, he didn't.

More ?

(Laugh laugh laugh)

HA! You deserved that one, Asuka!

Keke, poor misato.

Fuyutski is ?

Play by play is over. Great story, man!
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Well, well, soldier...


First, it was Misato-sama's turn. Now, it was Ritz's. LOL

Yeah, I agree with Fifth Horseman. I WAS dreading the cliché'ed "6-pack abs". LMAO

Super whimp to super stud. Just add water. ROFL

Once again, I agree with Horseman in that the sounds they made while they did the nasty were SO over-the-top and campy. However, it DID get a good chuckle outta me. ROFLOL

Too bad Misato-sama didn't ask Ritz for a threesome. THAT woulda been SO AW3SOME! ROFLMAO

N-I-CE work, son! You did great.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Tetris Ex Machina chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Great work of literature (again story was getting old)!
israelbauman chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
excellent read! I've read a lot of your your stories (nearly all of those based on NGE) and I realized that I hadn't actually reviewed one, so I thought that I would fix that. Please keep up the good work!

best wishes,



after I'm through with my main fic (or maybe if I take a break) I'm going to write a piece with Dr. Akagi getting hooked up with someone oddly too, but they're outside of the Evangelion universe, and I guaruntee it will be unxepected
Grey Wolf4 chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Not a bad little Shinji/Ritsuko fic at all and like yourself I am a staunch Shinji/Rei fan but I also like Shinji/Ritsuko!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
This is sort of cute. The premise isn't any crazier than a lot of stuff in NGE.

I am not sure that Ritsuko is in character here. I always perceived her as being very intelligent and curious, quiet and proud, but also sad, lonely, and a little fragile. But for a fantasy story like this it's okay.

I do find Shinji's lack of reaction to be kind of creepy. He's just lost fifteen years off his lifespan. I would think he'd be pretty upset about something like that. Most people would be.

The rivulet, or curse, or whatever it is, however, made me think of the Jusenkyo spring curses in Ranma 1/2. How 'bout an omake where Shinji didn't age, but he does turn into a little black piglet when he's wet with cold water, or Ritsuko turns into a cat?
Rose1948 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
A little rushed, yeah. A bit on the "Shinji's acting how?" Again, yeah. Lemon icing? Most definitely! Enjoyable? Hell hon, ~I~ enjoyed it!
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