Reviews for Rivulet Of Ages
Exalted Demi-Soul chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Nice work on the creativity. You didn't use the same cause but you managed to maintain the result. Nice thinking.
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Awesome story
Richy1991 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
great story
Panther-Freedom02 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
this is a good story maybe you can try a Shinji/Ritsuko/Misato/Maya one-shot and make it very sexy.
Fayneir chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Awesome! My favourite NGE pairing (besides Shinji/Misato.
Andrea Ye chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
haha first Evangelion fanfiction that I am reading and I really liked it... I never thought about this pair...

Nice
Alpha Taco chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Well done! Generally, I'm not the biggest fan of lemons. But, this was an amazing story. Here's a play-by-play of what I was thinking during this.

What?

Nice coverup.

Oh boy, I know what's going to happen.

That's ridiculous...

No, nononononono...

Whew!

Misato, you pervert!

Ritsuko. You could have been nicer.

The hell...

Shinji, you...Oh, I don't know what to say!

SHINJI YOU GODDAMN PERVERT!

Fools!

Won't someone notice if you're screaming?

Thank you for asking permission.

Ritsuko...Is that honestly the only thing that you're thinking of?

Discriptive...

(Angry/shocked/what the just happened look on my face)

Poor penpen.

Oh , did shinji revert to his normal age?

Good, he didn't.

More ?

(Laugh laugh laugh)

HA! You deserved that one, Asuka!

Keke, poor misato.

Fuyutski is ?

Play by play is over. Great story, man!
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Well, well, soldier...

This...was...AW3SOME!

First, it was Misato-sama's turn. Now, it was Ritz's. LOL

Yeah, I agree with Fifth Horseman. I WAS dreading the cliché'ed "6-pack abs". LMAO

Super whimp to super stud. Just add water. ROFL

Once again, I agree with Horseman in that the sounds they made while they did the nasty were SO over-the-top and campy. However, it DID get a good chuckle outta me. ROFLOL

Too bad Misato-sama didn't ask Ritz for a threesome. THAT woulda been SO AW3SOME! ROFLMAO

N-I-CE work, son! You did great.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Tetris Ex Machina chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Great work of literature (again story was getting old)!
israelbauman chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
excellent read! I've read a lot of your your stories (nearly all of those based on NGE) and I realized that I hadn't actually reviewed one, so I thought that I would fix that. Please keep up the good work!

best wishes,

israelbauman

PS

after I'm through with my main fic (or maybe if I take a break) I'm going to write a piece with Dr. Akagi getting hooked up with someone oddly too, but they're outside of the Evangelion universe, and I guaruntee it will be unxepected
Grey Wolf4 chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Not a bad little Shinji/Ritsuko fic at all and like yourself I am a staunch Shinji/Rei fan but I also like Shinji/Ritsuko!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
This is sort of cute. The premise isn't any crazier than a lot of stuff in NGE.

I am not sure that Ritsuko is in character here. I always perceived her as being very intelligent and curious, quiet and proud, but also sad, lonely, and a little fragile. But for a fantasy story like this it's okay.

I do find Shinji's lack of reaction to be kind of creepy. He's just lost fifteen years off his lifespan. I would think he'd be pretty upset about something like that. Most people would be.

The rivulet, or curse, or whatever it is, however, made me think of the Jusenkyo spring curses in Ranma 1/2. How 'bout an omake where Shinji didn't age, but he does turn into a little black piglet when he's wet with cold water, or Ritsuko turns into a cat?
Rose1948 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
A little rushed, yeah. A bit on the "Shinji's acting how?" Again, yeah. Lemon icing? Most definitely! Enjoyable? Hell hon, I enjoyed it!
Sun S. Li chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Ah i just think you wanted to make a lemon. It wasn't up to par with your other fics when it comes to actual possiblity of it happening and i'm not talking about the rivulet i'm talking about the fact that they jsut jumped each other's bones like that. But i still enjoyed it.
Genomaxis4005 chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
For the most part, I do like the story.

But have to agree with Fifth Horseman's review in parts.

This one felt a little rushed and the lemon did seem over the top.

In my opinion, the time frame could be stretched out a bit.

I mean Ritsuko and Shinji don't really know each other.

It would take time for Ritsuko to actually know Shinji.

That way she can assuredly say all those nice things she said about Shinji's character.

Kind of like your other story Bruises, where they had some length of time together at least.

Overall, I liked the story.

The Rivulet of Ages was a nice peace of originality.

The phone conversation between Misato and Ritsuko was funny.

Although it seemed odd to take an odd turn after Ritsuko said she would be better for Shinji than Misato.

Anyway thanks for writing and posting this, good luck to you and your next posts.
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