Reviews for No Chance for Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Everyone get a powerup a part from ranma, sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I’ll love this. |
![]() ![]() Great story, keep it up! Hey, you said DBZ wasn't good in anime but I like to tell you that the creator of DBZ was forces to cut out some stuff that would made great but the people who pays him, made him let out the episodes in a rush. Did you know Piccolo's people there were suppose to be females with hair! My older sibling's friend who is a huge fan done a lot of research on DBZ and creator, beside Dragon ball GT is the worse one, that doesn't even have a storyline! But I respect peoples options. Still like the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite Sailor Moon crossovers I've read. |
![]() ![]() So when do Setsuna and the old bitch get turned into boys? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That right there was amazing and awesome. Impressive. |
![]() ![]() Huh. So the mysterious timeline changes to the Amazon village didn't fully derail things there... Whatever they were, when mentioned last chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ending just a tiny bit rushed, but still awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are some definite sentence structure and grammar issues throughout, the dialogue needs a little bit of work here and there, and the truck incident was a bit contrived considering the level of strength and training he should have even at this point. Interesting concept, but overall I have to say not my cup of tea. Though I hope others enjoy the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really interesting starting chapter, I don’t know much about Sailor Moon lol, but curious how things will develop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let me guess, Nodoka got them a strap on? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi where can i get the PDF version? apparently there's embedded images init |
![]() ![]() ![]() hello |
![]() ![]() Mostly well written, but you're not Tolstoi. |
![]() ![]() ...I just wanna read about the cool worldbuilding but the author keeps trying to make me read softcore porn... |