|Reviews for No Chance for Fate|
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/30/2013
Shit I sent it unfinished oops D:
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/30/2013
If it's going to get any more "adult" I would say raise the rating.
Also, it might be safer to not have 13-14 year olds reading this, as
although it might not be lem
| Byakugan789 chapter 12 . 11/21/2013
so, is this what you meant about them getting a competent instructor? Makes sense i guess, though how you could possibly convince her is beyond me. It was like pulling teeth to ever get someone she thought worthy (ranma) any sort of training.
| Byakugan789 chapter 11 . 11/20/2013
Actually i hadn't thought it connected to his girl form, I was thinking the shadow hunter comment meant there was some left overs from Neko which, depending on what they were, could be incredibly beneficial.
| An avid reader chapter 19 . 11/19/2013
Couldn't hurt to raise the rating.
| Byakugan789 chapter 10 . 11/19/2013
The last one is most typically explained as things that one or more of the masterminds set up as long term or ongoing things that the senshi just didn't catch or didn't activate until much later. Set up and then died, set up as fail-safes, escaped the senshi during a large attack and other similar things. Not particularly canon, but not explicitly out-of-the-blue.
| Byakugan789 chapter 9 . 11/18/2013
A far better way to collect Chi would be to start collecting all of the street people in those healing vats. Nobody notices them so their disappearance wouldn't attract the shenshi and in a city the size of tokyo the homeless are literally in the thousands. Use a little of Nephrites idea to boost the rate at which they regenerate and grow in energy reserves you've quickly got the matrix going on. And considering they were actually able to awaken that Cthulu rip off metalia with their idiot ass plans in the original go round... heh, might be a full on war of the moons fall again. Good thing they can never make me beryls general.
| Byakugan789 chapter 7 . 11/17/2013
no need to comment if you already ended up doing something with this, but most of Ryogas early durability and offensive strength came from his little discussed iron cloth technique. It's a simple, strait forward infusing of cloth with chi to magnify its durability by an entire order of magnitude and allowed him to be thrown through walls and take his own umbrella to the chest without bruising whole dozen or so issues before Ranma could manage similar feats and is what allows him to turn his belt into a sword and his bandanas into fuma shuriken. While good techniques to add to Ranmas library their true power is the early potential for learning how to charge and project Chi, and it's something that always makes me bang my head against the keyboard when Authors completely ignore it or offer the hand-wave saying that ranma doesn't use it because he doesn't steal techniques. Stealing and modding techniques is what Ranma's whole school is famous for!...
Don't forget blindness, bears can see color, but otherwise their eyesight is _Horrible_! which also fits genma both because he wears glasses and because he, canonically, can't see the obvious when its right in front of him.
*snicker.* I've always had trouble feeling sorry for Ryoga. Still, that was almost too mean.
| Byakugan789 chapter 5 . 11/17/2013
Um...I can sort of see your point wanting to avoid the dumber or mor irritating cliches but ranma in canon takes on mythic Chinese demigods and in anime the gods themselves...and wins. Also, most of sailor moons real enemies are Cthulhuoid monstrosities with the power to quail even ranmas gods. Perhaps DBS is taking things too far, I have little problem agreeing with that, but the nine senshi taking classes in skilled badass from ranma and ranma taking classes in powered badass from them? Where's the problem in that?
| Byakugan789 chapter 3 . 11/16/2013
Genma actually has two easy job options open to him. Bouncer at any level of nightclub, these can actually pay quite highly depending on how high income or how shady they are and an enfocer who's punches can break the sound barrier and is capable of racing a car on the highway would be WELL paid indeed. Secondly he could be a construction worker. Even before Ranma started learning his special power techniques he was able to lift entire Olympic pool sized blocks of ice over his head while floating with another martial artist and Genma was much more powerful than Ranma for quite a while, nearly half the comic in fact. WIth his 'sealed' school capable of taking down buildings entire in minutes with little damage to himself and being able to scale impossible distances with enormous loads he could replace a crane for hauling. Aside from that, Ranma is highly intelligent, if exceedingly ill educated, that intelligence had to come from somewhere and his warped mother Nodoka while far from stupid, doesn't seem particularity brilliant herself so Genma's got to have something going for him upstairs and construction isn't hard with a good foreman.
There are of course harder prospects that won't require him to expand his skill-set particularly widely. Teaching Tokyo special forces police or military his advance form of martial art could land him either a civilian contract for millions or an easy commission as an officer for upwards of 90grand US a year. There's genuinely an officer post for special combat instructor in both Japanese and American Military's.
Then there's bar tender, cook, alphabet soup government operative, crime-lords pet enforcer or assassin... Minato wards about to be plagued by demons, even if they do feed off chi, there are techniques to hold onto ones chi and redirect air-born energies in canon and the sailors occasionally took down their monsters just by pummeling and throwing them around hulk style so he could get commissioned by the city for that when it becomes obvious the police cant handle the situation.
I suppose dock worker works, and it's about right for Genma's poor imagination, but its hardly all he could do...
Funny that Mars and Mercury didn't recognize any connection between them though... not bad, and i don't remember the comic well enough to say what they did at first, but i would've thought... something?
| Bountyhunter1977 chapter 19 . 11/12/2013
great chapter , like the new weapons for the girls.
if you want to raise the rating then do so, if no other reason then just to be on the safe side and all.
| Dumbledore chapter 19 . 11/11/2013
| Ranmayamabushi chapter 19 . 11/11/2013
wooot keep up the great work!
| 9foxgrl chapter 19 . 11/10/2013
this is a great story, pls update soon!
| Quathis chapter 19 . 11/10/2013
This wasn't Ranma's chapter by a long shot, humiliation in battle and in training. At least it looks to not unduly affecting his relationship with Ami. And the new weapons do fit the character and add a degree of professionalism to them. Custom, magical weapons, after all, would belong to those of high rank and skill.
Usagi and Mamoru's pleasant conversation looks to opening the gates for them, if only slightly. It is good build up for any lasting bond between that isn't based on "oh, our past lives were love, so should we!" kind of mentality. Frankly, the down to earth approach you showed here looks to a much better start. Hoping to see more of it in future.
So the stakes are raised with the bad guys and the good guys are at a disadvantage in the search. Yeah, things are definitely getting darker and given that you have Ranma training with a mostly nude Ami serving as a distraction, I'd say the increased rating is warranted.
Until next time.