|Reviews for No Chance for Fate|
| Grizzmon chapter 5 . 4/9/2013
And so Sailor Moon arrives...
| Grizzmon chapter 4 . 4/9/2013
Well yes, Ranma and Usagi will never fit in...
| Grizzmon chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
Well, Rei is still a bit crazy...
| Grizzmon chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
Well, Will Ami and Ran-chan become girlfriends?
| Grizzmon chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Well this looks like it will be an interesting story...
| Rune Tobor chapter 13 . 4/8/2013
Canon only makes sense if you ignore the "romantic comedy" label and treat it as dark satire on the "honor system". Takahashi needs to be hit with a clue mallet, repeatedly.
| OBSERVER01 chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
| sunshinekc chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
Glad to see this story finally updated! I see what ya do to Tsubasa but does this mean konatsu will be booted out? Awesome update!
| irnzenmonk chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
good chapter ne
| BF110C4 chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
It was a good chapter, and it does help to prepare the setting for the next part. I would like to see more of Ami's father, especially when he interacts with Genma.
The night scenes are in good taste, even if risque enough to gain M classification on the site (personally I don't care, but you know how is it).
| Quathis chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
Well, that ended on big cliffy with Ranma seeing the problem going on. Seems pretty early for the Big Bad to show up, but I'm hoping things go a little better than they had previously. Especially since it looks like Ranma will be getting some training that would really benefit the cause. The whole chapter was pretty fast paced, and I really enjoyed the humor. Felt a bit uncomfortable with the morning troubles parts, a bit too voyeuristic for my taste. Still showed important insights into the thoughts of Ranma and Ami. Until next time.
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
The night scenes...weren't awful. Are they sharing dreams or something? Also, I like how Mousse and Shampoo are both growing up. The main thing I don't like is Beryl's 'invitation'. Is she really stupid enough to give the senshi a chance to smash the one operation they haven't found that could turn the tide of the war?
Aside from that, this story is very wonderful, and I can't wait to read more of it. Update soon!
| Zikarn Krais chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
The part with Beryl seemed particularly stupid.
If you have an operation to revive your dead goddess, you don't hand out invitations to your enemies. At all. Of any sort.
Better to have them be completely unaware and thus unprepared when your goddess is back to life.
And the thing about Ranma at the end seems more of a Deus Ex. Unless he's been spiritually trained to SEE life energy when it's NOT being visibly generated as an aura (and unless I miss my mark, he hasn't), he should be just as unaware as the others. He might feel his own aura being sucked out, which yes, he can notice, but he shouldn't be able to see this 'blob' thing you have going at the end.
So yes, I get that you're aiming for a showdown where the Senshi discover this fiendish plan, etc etc, but I think you could've gone about setting it up less obviously.
| chaosglory626 chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
I can't wait for Ranma's training to pick up. The Saotome Sen Ken styles are perfect for monster slaying and would allow him to at least keep up with the Senshi. I can't wait for more, keep up the good work.
| MWkillkenny84 chapter 16 . 4/7/2013
Umh... I want to ask this: will Thetis and Jadeite escape their canonical ends (eternal imprisonement/sealing in crystal for Jadeite and death for Thetis)? I like the paring Jadeite/Thetis (when I don't ship Jadeite and Mars, of course)...
Well, it was time that someone showed us what Jadeite can do when he has not to rush things thanks to Beryl...