|Reviews for No holding back|
| Oh Nathalie chapter 2 . 12/7/2008
wow. that's all I can write right now.
| Oh Nathalie chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
wow... Bella's turning into a vampire but it wasn't the way I expected it though...
| Nashi chapter 7 . 12/5/2008
WOW, I like the darker Bella and Edward, I love how they reversed after the first chapter. Edward's vulnerability was beyond sweet.
| Setfiregirl chapter 7 . 12/3/2008
Oh...wow...that was VERY nice...I really really really liked it...x]
| meg chapter 7 . 11/30/2008
AW! i love the ending of this storyk!
| twilight-fedishfreak chapter 7 . 11/20/2008
i really liked that , it was very good! i like the story , i know alot of people have done it but i think you did a really good one , especially for the fact that it was kinda short.i cant wait for more of your stories!
| peter2918 chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
AWESOME CHAPTER! cant wait to see what happens next! keep up the awesome job (Y) :)
| twilighters-anonymous chapter 7 . 11/14/2008
God! I LOVE this story! This is actually my second time reading it! I think this is by far your best story. It's my favorite. I exspecially really like the epilogue. But, I like the last chapter. It's really sweet. I love your work. Good luck on the pregnancy!-twilighters-anonymous
| JoVersify chapter 3 . 11/10/2008
Holy crap. This story just gets better and better. I can't believe out of all the stories I've read I haven't read any of yours yet. You are amazing!
I see your name EVERYWHERE, yet for some unknown reason, I waited until now to mozy over to your profile and I was pleasantly shocked at the number of stories you have completed!
Oh man! I can't wait to get to the next chapter. I'm holding off on going to the bathroom so I can finish! Damn, you're gonna give me a UTI!
ha ha ha
| JoVersify chapter 2 . 11/10/2008
Bella is freaking Vamptastic!
WAY TO GO! I love this crazy, erotic, all-knowing, all-powerful Bella. She is a God among vampires.
Soo cool! Awesome idea!
And the little girl-on-girl reference was so very tactful and crazy hott at the same time!
| JoVersify chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
That was freaking awesome. I would love it if you took this Chapter...and rewrote it a hundred times just this way with all different scenarios. That would be cool. Hey, aren't we all dirty little freaks somewhere deep down? I KNOW I am.
| Sendmeonmyway chapter 7 . 11/5/2008
I love the story. It was dark in the beginning and it slowly lightened up but I have to say she handled the whole thing amazingly well.
But I feel sorry for her in a way. She knows other peoples souls better than she knows her own...
| marjojo02 chapter 7 . 11/2/2008
Wow! I've been reading your old stuff and this is my favorite so far. I love how powerful and confident Bella is in this fic-it's a welcome change from when she's sometimes a total doormat in canon! Great job!
PS. I'm sure you're aware of this, but you could use someone to read through and look for mistakes: except/accept, then/than, they're/there, that type of thing. You're a good writer, but these mistakes distract from your prose. I'm picky about that stuff, sorry. I'm an English teacher, it comes with the territory.
| flecour chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
If your a dirty freak, then so am I cuz I found that really hot. LOL
| Edward.love.of.my.existance chapter 7 . 10/28/2008
I adore this story. Never read anything like it. Bella is so awesomely OOC and Edward is just good old Eddie boy. You are and amazing author.