|Reviews for No holding back|
| BethyBoop chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
wow this was great brilliant you should deffinately carry this one on!
| inluvwitacullen chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
I like it and I can't wait to hear more!
| bitten-sln chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
i actually really like it...is there something wrong with me? i dunno anyways that was actually really hott... i hope she falls in love with him once she's a vampire...umm will you continue? please continue!
| Jennie chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
This was... interesting. I can' think of the right word. Very good, though. Please continue!
| Blue Eyed Blue Blood chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
This is really good! You have a great style of writing! Love Too Late! Keep updating!
| semper.meus.deus chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
It would be amazing if you continued this! Too Late is one of my favorite stories tat I'm reading right now, and this looks like it would be a great one too!
| jilyjam chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
w o w . . .
I actually really liked that! I think it's a great idea! Please continue it!
| Coven Mistress chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
This was great! You should totally add to this story.
| stinkybunny chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
hot in a kinky, freaky way!
| Kristyn Ezer chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
This was amazing! I wasn't sure how you would end it...but I loved it! I really hope you continue this as a full story!
| muggleinlove chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
It is way OOC, but I enjoyed it. You must continue it! Ofcourse, she forgives him (lol). It's and Edward/Bella story.
But update Too Late first! Now I'm back to my writing, my drunk Edward is getting fresh (lol).
| edwardandbellabelong2gether chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
That's a different take! I liked it! You could probably turn that into an interesting story!
| MoonStarWithWings chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
Ooh, evil Edward.
He seemed so not-Edward. It was weird.
I'm so glad that didn't happen!