Reviews for Never Too Late
PAT2024 chapter 27 . 6/12
Thank you for sharing your story with us.

It was much better than My Miracle, My Angel and I liked it. You have made significant progress, but there are still some weaknesses to your plot (it seems Alice has almost no more visions, and you don't explain why none of the 8 vampires can smell the hunters / hear the hunters when they are close (they should have been able to follow at least Ariana's scent when she was captured but they lost the trail, that seems unbelievable), Edward's mind reading capability is also never really used to fight against the hunters or to prepare for battle ... Unfortunately for me all these inconsistencies make that you story is not as perfect as it could have been. But keep up the good work, I think you have talent and a good imagination. Thank you
MusicToSleepTo chapter 25 . 4/26
And then I start to feel like an idiot cos it's basically what happened to renesmee...lol
MusicToSleepTo chapter 24 . 4/26
HEY ITS SO COOL THHAT WAS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS EXPECTING TO HAPPEN TO HER
MusicToSleepTo chapter 6 . 4/26
Loool okay
MusicToSleepTo chapter 5 . 4/26
Omg is he a werewolf?
Comrade'sRoza chapter 27 . 2/8
Lovely!
BookWormGurl04 chapter 6 . 12/6/2015
Great
MewTwo and Mew chapter 19 . 1/27/2015
You...killed...Alice... I don't know if I can read this anymore.
FireIceandPoison chapter 27 . 8/2/2014
So precious I could cry. I love this and you are such an amazing writer.
blank chapter 27 . 4/21/2013
I LUV IT!
Guest chapter 17 . 2/22/2013
TOO MANY ILY'S
Iamaperson chapter 6 . 2/22/2013
This is waaay too mushy
Haribo2012 chapter 27 . 1/13/2013
just spend most of the day reading this omg i loved it! soo sweet love name of Arianna baby daughter so sweet!
emily chapter 10 . 12/23/2012
YES! I DO HATE GABE! while i was reading this chapter, i was eating applesauce and i ended up with a half full cup of applesauce in the end. i then found out that i had been just nervously chewing on the spoon in my mouth.
emily chapter 7 . 12/23/2012
i no im late but i think its constlations
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