Reviews for Bloodlines
j chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
wow, you're a great writer. i love how you capture the moments!
pockybandits89 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
great story

would've been better if Sakura lived...but at least it show that Sasuke really isn't evil and and always thinking about revenge...
ribbons-paws chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Short... but cute, in a way. ;) Love it.
MyUsedRomance chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
it makes me happy to learn that sakura and sasuke had a child. but poor sasuke-kun, no sakura to live those years with. :[

wonderful!
Ataraninja chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
wow, nice oneshot. i like the plot behind it as well. Does her name mean anything special?
Runendf chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
It's a nice little piece, I like it! I bet Sasuke was secretly thankful that his daughter wasn't a son with pink hair though.
Inuki chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
This is a sweet little piece. I like how even though Sasuke still seemed to be cold on the outside, he did and still does care. I really appreciate the fact that you try to portray each character in a positive light, even the not so good characters.
sasusaku779 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
sniffle sniffle! how amazingly brilliantly sad...

its so amazing how beautiful it is!
Tsuna De Vongola Decimo chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Aw. thats a nice fic
Innocence and Instinct chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
wow this story is awesome
nothing but blue chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
i liked this. very good and interesting. :D that would be so cool if that really happened.
no.regrets.for.now chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
great story! but one thing confused me a bit...

“I'm not sure when it happened, or how it happened, or what misunderstanding or danger forced my mother to leave Konoha...but I know that Sasuke is my father. He never gave any indication he was, and never called himself such within my hearing...but there's no one else it could be.”

A soft snort, and she shook her head. “I can hardly be blamed for not realising. After all, it's not like there's much family resemblance between us. He used to tell me I was the spitting image of my mother, and now I think I finally understand why he looked so sad when he said that.”

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i think that part indicated that she doesnt know if sasuke is exactly her father...

but that information clearly contradicted this part:

“I just think I wanted to tell you why you lost. You never took into account that maybe, just maybe, Sasuke wanted something else besides restoring the glory of the Uchiha clan. That maybe he didn't want a war – maybe he wanted his wife and child to live in peace. And maybe he'd betray you to ensure that.”

“Wife?” Madara was unable to halt the word that burst from his lips.

Chitose nodded. “Wife. They were married. I took my mother's name because Sasuke...my father...wanted to keep me safe. He knew that if you ever found out there was another Uchiha in the world...there would be no place I could hide.”

She sighed, and shook her head. “I think I just wanted to let you know where you went wrong. And now, I'll leave you to wait for the execution. My dad and I are going to visit Mum's grave.”

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just want to clear things! Sorry!

and by the way!

really great story! i really love it!
a thousand cranes chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
The feeling at the end was somehow not as dark or bitter as I assumed a conversation with Uchiha Madara could have gone. In actuality it was content, amused, and slightly maybe even proud. It kind of reminded me of the feeling that jiraiya must have felt when he died, since he remembered Naruto and how promising he was. haha I dunno if that's actually a valid similarity but I'd like to hope so.
anonymous chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
i love this
AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
...I like the idea of this.

You did a good job of having Madara lose, and have all sorts of hints around to the how and why and the past...

XD
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