|Reviews for 24 Chips of Bone to Make a Mask to Hide the Truth|
| PaolaPaipa chapter 24 . 12/30/2016
Let me cry a river and die, this was su uttery perfect and sad and my heart is totally broken for the stolen dreams, for the dreams she lost.
| PaolaPaipa chapter 21 . 12/29/2016
I have an epiphany about this chapter, and now I remember I also read it in Spanish and the person who translate it always put a lot of comment on it, in the begining I was thinking maybe you took away those comments but now I get it it was the other one lol
| PaolaPaipa chapter 19 . 12/29/2016
Kill me now, because this Shinji its the Shinji we all deserved
| PaolaPaipa chapter 17 . 12/29/2016
Let me cry a river, because its canon, this is what actually happend and you cant tell me otherwise
| PaolaPaipa chapter 11 . 12/29/2016
I still can get over this story, common its perfection as its finnest
| PaolaPaipa chapter 9 . 12/29/2016
I've have read this story at least 6 times in my life and this chapter still gets me in the hear, cold and hard.
| konatachan603 chapter 26 . 4/28/2016
Man this fic hit me right in the feels
I was searching for a nice HiyorixShinji fic to read, and this is EXACTLY what i wanted
Thank you so much for creating this! I loved ever second of it!
| despicableme chapter 26 . 2/12/2015
This is exactly the reason why I love fanfiction so much - you take the characters and pairings we want to read more about and give us precisely what we want and more. You wrote a wonderful story here. And very believable, what with the characters given ;) Amazing job! :D
| Shidou chapter 26 . 8/5/2013
Awww...a very cute and well developed piece.
Thank you for the good work :)
| wolfeclipse25 chapter 18 . 10/12/2012
I liked this chapter and the previous. I want to see a story about Shinji (or all the Vizards) fighting his Hollow. But no such luck... This is as close as I get to it.
| BlackCatNeko999 chapter 26 . 8/7/2012
This was awesome :) All of it.
You are a great author so , please, write more ;DD
| BlessedRain chapter 26 . 7/19/2012
Holy... Holy crap almighty... Where do i even begin? Oh gosh...
This was, by far, one of the best ShiYori fics ive read. and that is saying much more than alot. Thats quite the imagination you've got, I must say.
I loved everybit of this, and there was definitly tears at the end of this, and eye rolls and laughter everywhere else :3
Just a real quick question, does Hiyori ever actually say that she would be his bride in the manga or anime? i've seen alot of people use that, and i couldnt decide if it was true or not, considering that im just getting to the part in the series where Shinji is interduced and all.
Although i was a bit surprised by it being Kensei who died, i liked how you well... made him die. lol, that sounds awful! but, its pretty much the truth.
I reeeaaallly hope that ou'll write some more about ShiYori! And soon! ;P
hahahaha, well good luck! and you are one very talented writer, so keep going!
| Mystowalker chapter 26 . 6/5/2012
Whoa, I really found this late. Good, well-written story. I feel really bad for Hachi and Kensei... But in the end I love the way the relationship between Hyiori and Shinji grown up. Good job!
| unagi-chen chapter 26 . 5/13/2012
awwww... hiyori and Hirako are so cute together! Of course, there were many times here that was so meaningful, I really like how its all their first!
| TagoMode chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
superduper worth the reading for and the eyebags! keep writting!