|Reviews for When the Cold of Winter Comes|
| AD Lewis chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
Aha could tell Susan was being groomed as the new White Witch when they first crossed blades. Loved this little fic, despite everyone pretty much getting killed lol.
| dark nightmere chapter 12 . 12/24/2012
I think soon if you decide to contiue this story or write a squal susan should bring a new army forth to crush her sister. I think over the years susan should become more evil more like Jadis every moment she should become more and more craul to the people of narnia only her forces should be spared her evil she should become the white witch. I think finely after a vary long winter that never ends evan reaching the steps of chir parvel Lucy should see that her sister is gone and relise that she most lanch an attack to stop a new white witch from arising. I think as susan becomes more evil she should wish to crush her sister and bring narnia under her tyranical rule to rule over all of Narnia in an ertenal winter that will last forever. I think that lucy should bring an army to try and stop Susan from bringing the berginning of the end and stop the darkness from rising again knowing the only way is to slay susan. I think in the battle Susan should kill Lucy taking Narnia for her own as Lucy's last words to her sister are "you will never win Susan my sister" and then she dies on Susan blade as the white witch rules again.
| Benevolent Contradiction chapter 12 . 11/28/2012
I adore this story. It kept me interested through each and every chapter. The ending (not sure if chapter 12 was the end? My phone doesn't show me if stories are complete or not.) was particularly creative. I was sad that Jadis died once again but even in the first chapter I had guessed that it would happen eventually. But she's never really gone is she? I'm also satisfied that you dislike Peter as well. I never really liked him. He's like an overdone version of Optimus Prime except I actually like Optimus. Peter always wanted to be the hero. He was to rightous. Luckily, he gets poked at with swords many times in this fic! :D Well done with this story. It's an amazing read.
| ataleoffiction chapter 12 . 10/28/2012
Damn, this was really good. I enjoyed seeing Susan being groomed to eventually becoming the new White Witch.
| gabe chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
hey guess what i am writing the exact same it just has the same name
| Adorkablenerd21 chapter 2 . 8/24/2012
This is very interesting. I never thought about shipping Susan and Jadis, but you opened my eyes. Very creative!
| A2463 chapter 12 . 6/26/2012
Absolutely love it! Really love it! Please continue!
| Aeris de Lothlorien chapter 12 . 5/20/2012
I like it
| LBF chapter 12 . 3/25/2012
Excellent story and I loved the ending. Susan did kick ass.
| Arcane Ranger Knight chapter 12 . 2/3/2012
EPIC! I love it when Susan kicks a$$ and the femlash with her and Jadis was freaking hot. However, I do like Peter and Edmund so I was sad when you killed them off and all the character-bashing is just so cliche. It was a cool story though and what really stood out to me was Susan's idea about her being the Queen of Winter and Lucy the Summer Queen. That really makes sense. And Susan's powers are darn awesome! THere's just one problem though about how Lucy gets her powers. Still, the story is effing hot and I loved it through and through. The ending was so epic too because we all know that history is gonna repeat itself, hopefully in the form of a sequel. Love it! :)
| AdamTobiasGrayson chapter 12 . 11/8/2011
is this story over? if it isnt its way overdue for an update. i love the whole bad Susan
| Lestat Giovanni chapter 12 . 7/17/2011
You suck for killin' her, but I get that child murder would be harsh. Anyhow, I really loved this story. It was short though, and I wish you'd write me another. The pairing just works here!
| Baccan chapter 12 . 5/30/2011
That was a GREAT cliff-hanger!
| Halewyn's Lady chapter 12 . 5/22/2011
oooooh such a tasty fan fic!
I read through the entire thing in one go.
Especially the vampire chapter was so yummy! *I am hungry, it influences my choice of words* I love to see Narnia girls fighting. Peter was annoying. Also perfect ending, and Jadis still isn't gone. :)
| Bellatrix Lepus chapter 12 . 5/22/2011
Awww Jadis died again, oh wait no she's no really dead :L lol I loves this fic :) xx