Reviews for Into the battle: Delta team
Seaidau chapter 1 . 10/9/2001
247Lyricism chapter 1 . 10/9/2001
Hallo Mr. Shinigami! ;) Guess who? You got it. I liked the story - the style is very good. And I understand the plot, though I've never played the game and it doesn't exactly connect with me the way it should with gamers. But that's not your fault. Keep up the good work and ... write more stuff! *nods repeatedly* Ciao for now! ;)
Pjl2k3 chapter 1 . 10/8/2001
The story is fast paced and filled with action. You need to proof read however foryour typos (to instead of two, it's instead of its). I suppose some would call that quibbling but it's distracting for the discerning reader. Keep going though because I think it's a fine start.