Reviews for A New Debt
Aki666 chapter 2 . 3/16/2010
I liked this chapter. It was very well writen.
LuckyBubbles chapter 10 . 1/21/2010
I'm so sad u ddnt continue this one it's my favorite ever
shikamaru003 chapter 10 . 12/25/2008
it is rilly good I love it
TrulyWicked365 chapter 10 . 11/28/2008
ShikaTem and NejiTen
GuggaxD chapter 10 . 11/28/2008
ohh... yay for the books but please update soon!
darkchocol8807 chapter 9 . 11/13/2008
this is cute! so do u think u could write something with kakasaku at it? it doesn't have to be kakasaku-centric, but they're just so cute and underappreciated!

love shikatema!

chemiskorpion0002 chapter 8 . 10/3/2008
“Because he loves me” came Temari’s voice, as she walked up to the stand.

i melted. perfect.
lokibotan chapter 9 . 9/22/2008
You could either give the story a small, not too graphic lemon or you could give it an epilogue from sometime in the future clearing up the Suna/Konoha issue for Temari. How often she travels back and forth, how the wedding goes, and if any kids are in the future, etc. Good Luck.
T.Killer.Kunoichi chapter 9 . 9/18/2008
Im comment 40, yaay!

Anyway, another chapter would be good.

11 stars

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Player Zero chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
Yeah another chapter!
Kalkervic5150 chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
hell yea i want another chapter

get to work nao!

Kag3nui chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
Please, please write more to this story I really like it and want to know what else could and will happen.
GuggaxD chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
OMG is it done? I was so looking forward for the next chapter '-.- please continue this story ! i love it soo... make a wedding chap or something (and make it a night too) pretty, pretty, pretty please?
LuckyBubbles chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
ANOTHER CHAPTER YAY! and if u do write another story what pair will it be for?
raysofhappiness chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
yes! do something more romantic with temari and shikamaru! have them go all the way please!
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