Reviews for A New Debt
Aki666 chapter 2 . 3/16/2010
I liked this chapter. It was very well writen.
LuckyBubbles chapter 10 . 1/21/2010
I'm so sad u ddnt continue this one it's my favorite ever
shikamaru003 chapter 10 . 12/25/2008
it is rilly good I love it
TrulyWicked365 chapter 10 . 11/28/2008
ShikaTem and NejiTen
GuggaxD chapter 10 . 11/28/2008
ohh... yay for the books but please update soon!
darkchocol8807 chapter 9 . 11/13/2008
this is cute! so do u think u could write something with kakasaku at it? it doesn't have to be kakasaku-centric, but they're just so cute and underappreciated!

love shikatema!

DarkC
chemiskorpion0002 chapter 8 . 10/3/2008
“Because he loves me” came Temari’s voice, as she walked up to the stand.

i melted. perfect.
lokibotan chapter 9 . 9/22/2008
You could either give the story a small, not too graphic lemon or you could give it an epilogue from sometime in the future clearing up the Suna/Konoha issue for Temari. How often she travels back and forth, how the wedding goes, and if any kids are in the future, etc. Good Luck.
Vice Tessenjutsu no kunoichi chapter 9 . 9/18/2008
Im comment 40, yaay!

Anyway, another chapter would be good.

11 stars

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Player Zero chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
Yeah another chapter!
Kalkervic5150 chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
hell yea i want another chapter

get to work nao!

lol
Kag3nui chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
Please, please write more to this story I really like it and want to know what else could and will happen.
GuggaxD chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
OMG is it done? I was so looking forward for the next chapter '-.- please continue this story ! i love it soo... make a wedding chap or something (and make it a night too) pretty, pretty, pretty please?
LuckyBubbles chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
ANOTHER CHAPTER YAY! and if u do write another story what pair will it be for?
raysofhappiness chapter 9 . 9/14/2008
yes! do something more romantic with temari and shikamaru! have them go all the way please!
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