Great job! I can't wait to see what comes next!

Make more chapters

I'll be waiting

That was a good start!

Please make sure to come up with another chapter

cool cant wait for next chapter

Poor Konoka. But, completely understandable that Setsuna should leave. But to leave Konoka like that? Heartless. I'm hoping for a happy ending.

... i don't really talk... though this is a nice story...

Another good one by my Fate-chan~ ;3 Anyway, I hope to read more!

The detail is good, and I haven't read many stories that can change POV that easily without it making the story sound weird! X3 Heck, I don't know Negi, and I still don't get confused~! 3

Keep writing, Wolfy!

Another good story~ :3 It helps that the way you write it helps me understand the story a bit more 3

Anyway, your stories are good, even simpler one, or ones like these~ :3 I hope to read a lot more, and that you keep writing! You'll be even more popular, someday soon~

PLEASE UPDATE! SO AWESOME!

please continue :D i want more action and more loving :P ahaha anyway what the heck why the hell cant she tell konoka or negi about it lol

aw this breaks my heart man T_T shes gnna wake up and setsunas not gnna be there ToT its so sad but good great job ;_;

Curious with the next chapter

LOL, you cannot end it like that ! Such a cliffhanger. ;; Please continue, I would like to know what happens..

That's so sad!

And so frustrating!

Ahh, why does Setsuna have to leave?