Reviews for Phantom of the Theatre
Shadow-chan93 chapter 27 . 7/31/2008
weißt du, dass diese Geschichte mich zu einem Bild inspiriert hat? Rosette und Chrno in Phantom der Oper Klamotten XD

Wenn du willst suche ich dir den Link raus, ich habe es auf hochgeladen...
VioletMoonlights chapter 27 . 7/30/2008
I love Chrono in this story, makes me want to go in the story and hug him! lol...yeah I'm kinda a Chrono freak -_-' I'm too opsessed with that guy. But anyways back to the review, I tought the chap was cool Just keep making more ok? You rock _
Serenity Sasamoto chapter 26 . 7/29/2008
*applauds* i loved this chapter X3 mainly cause it had 'Angels' in it, i love Within Temptation, i have almost all their songs on my compy and one my characters sings it in a story i wrote but it's not posted yet... but i can't wait for the next chapter, it's gonna be good . and sorry it took me so long to review, I've been busy . i'm having some complications with my mentality and relationships and everything is outta whack with me T-T

VioletMoonlights chapter 26 . 7/28/2008
YAY more chapters! keep making more chapters for this and Neighborhood problems! You are an awesome author _ Oh can you read my fanfic sometime? It's called My Summer and I think it's on Chrono Crusade list (Chrono falls in love with another girl in that one, so plz dont get mad on that) Okies I can't wait til your others chapters! YAY! Like I said before you're awesome! ~_ *wink*

Shadow-chan93 chapter 26 . 7/28/2008
great job

Angels is one of my favourite songs, too!
Shadow-chan93 chapter 25 . 7/27/2008

Ich hab gelesen, dass du normaler Weise auf Deutsch schreibst. Also denke ich mal, dass es okay ist, wenn ich auch auf Deutsch kommentiere.

Deine Geschichte ist echt toll, eine meiner Lieblingsgeschichten. Komischer Weise hatte ich eine ähnliche Idee wie du, auch ein Mix zwischen Phantom der Oper und Chrno Crusade. Aber ich war zu faul um daraus eine Story zu machen und bin echt froh, dass es jemanden wie dich gibt, der anders als ich nicht zu faul dafür ist.

Schreib schön weiter, ich freue mich schon au das nächste Kapitel.
VioletMoonlights chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Serenity Sasamoto chapter 24 . 7/16/2008
o.o i wonder why Azzy was in the theatre, i think i know . i wonder when you're gonna get her and joshua together though :D but the chapter was decent, not much action but something calm before the big show is always a good thing.

Serenity Sasamoto chapter 23 . 7/15/2008
i'm glad they got finished in time and i should've known the new dress would be blue, Rosette always wears blue -.- but anyways Shader seems overly excited of course she did direct the play :) good chapter, i bet the next one will be dramatic. Oh and watch out for ninja chipmunks...
Serenity Sasamoto chapter 22 . 7/12/2008
I thought the 'angel' nickname was sweet :) and i'm glad lemonies don't exist, they sound awful like the lemon heads XP and i bet Chrono told Aion that the treasure thingy was under the stage...or something...i don't have any candy but i have Koala March, but i can give you cyber candy -gives a load of cyber candy-

Serenity Sasamoto chapter 20 . 7/8/2008
a small kitchen, i didn't think of that .U ugh i'm dunce -.- maybe it was in the break room or something. :D but i finally get back on the computer and i get two chapters! XD so i'm very happy, my brother has been hogging the compy -.- so mean...
Serenity Sasamoto chapter 19 . 7/8/2008
i like how you made up Chrono's past :D having Mary fall down the hatch was a good idea. I'm glad i could finally read about his past and see what went on but there's gonna me more right .? this story has gorwn into an addiction or somethin...
Serenity Sasamoto chapter 18 . 7/3/2008
o.o ...cliffhanger -dies- and it was getting good . Chrono finally opening up and you cut off, oh well, it's a patience thing i guess but still...but i can't wait to see what you threaded together for Chrono's past and i was glad to be of help to you :D
Serenity Sasamoto chapter 17 . 7/2/2008
Woot! i didn't expect you to update so soon but i'm glad you did :) i was shocked that he would go so far as to ruin the play or is the play still on? . suspense, it kills...
kitty00240 chapter 16 . 6/30/2008
you shouldn't change anything. If you want, you should probably improve on the writing style, but that only comes with practice.


The story is fine as it is. I'd try to write more about places...

With should try to create a world for the characters as well as their past. Eh, they're people in this world.
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