This is a really amazing story. :) I hope you update this story soon, I really want to read the rest of it.

This was one of the most convincing pieces of fan fiction I have ever read (though I honestly don't read that much of it since most of the attempts are unoriginal and painful to read). The change in relationship between the two main characters is convincing and isn't rushed. The story is a believable sequel, so natural that it seems like you wrote the original. Using the ring and the wise man was quite clever. I hope you write other stories besides fan fiction, because it looks like you have promise.

My only criticism is that there were quite a few spelling/grammar errors, but that's an easy fix. Good story telling easily made up for such little errors.

I hope you update soon i love the story.

I LOVE your drunken chess game! So much fun! They are just way way too cute here. Perfection. Thanks so much for sharing this! -Clare

Hey dont leave us like that or update soon.

YAY for drunken chess fights! That was original AND amazing, dear.

I. Want. More. .

please? I'm despairing here *sniff*

I'm really enjoying this story but you're really hanging us readers out on a limb! I can't wait until the next chapter to see if that kiss leads to something else. I'm hoping that you're planning on a "happily ever after" ending.

You are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work and hurry up with those updates.

*Squeal*! :D Yay! They kissed! (Even if drunk ;P)

Can't wait for more!

Update soon! :D

This was really an amazing chapter!

Please tell me this isn't another catastrophe about to happen! Jareth has more pride than brains and Sarah speaks before thinking! You can't stay, Sarah? You don't even know why! Stay with him! He loves you, and you're already halfway there! Come on, guys!

As all of those exclamations points should make it pretty obvious, I won't mention again how much I love this story. I'm glad you finally updated, and hope we see another chap soon. Hope your aunt is doing well now. :)

Aww love this chapter :-)

Let this be a lesson to us all...never play chess when drunk.:D Nice job please update soon.:D

oh gosh...why he vanished...

Please update soon.

OMG and you stop it there? I'm going to lose my mind! This story is so good, so intriguing and has me SO hooked and she asks him if he still feels that way, he leaves and there are no more chapters! I'm going to scream... wait it is 1:30 am.. screaming would wake the family.. AHA I will scream to the author... screams of PLEASE PLEASE MORE! What happens next? Please don't leave me like this! Your story has me SO sucked in and ... ARGH!

Ahem. I humbly beseech you, dearest author, out of the depths of my despair to please continue lest I lose my sanity wondering what next.

Thank you.

By the way, I like your story lots.

Clare