Reviews for Another Chance
iCraft chapter 15 . 11/12/2009
This is a really amazing story. :) I hope you update this story soon, I really want to read the rest of it.
A. S. Grange chapter 15 . 12/31/2008
This was one of the most convincing pieces of fan fiction I have ever read (though I honestly don't read that much of it since most of the attempts are unoriginal and painful to read). The change in relationship between the two main characters is convincing and isn't rushed. The story is a believable sequel, so natural that it seems like you wrote the original. Using the ring and the wise man was quite clever. I hope you write other stories besides fan fiction, because it looks like you have promise.

My only criticism is that there were quite a few spelling/grammar errors, but that's an easy fix. Good story telling easily made up for such little errors.
sessysbaby666 chapter 15 . 12/10/2008
I hope you update soon i love the story.
magialuna chapter 15 . 10/30/2008
I LOVE your drunken chess game! So much fun! They are just way way too cute here. Perfection. Thanks so much for sharing this! -Clare
Ginabella59 chapter 15 . 10/29/2008
Hey dont leave us like that or update soon.
OceanFae chapter 15 . 10/26/2008
YAY for drunken chess fights! That was original AND amazing, dear.
blah chapter 15 . 10/24/2008
I. Want. More. .

please? I'm despairing here *sniff*
tonemara chapter 15 . 10/24/2008
I'm really enjoying this story but you're really hanging us readers out on a limb! I can't wait until the next chapter to see if that kiss leads to something else. I'm hoping that you're planning on a "happily ever after" ending.

You are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work and hurry up with those updates.
futrCSI1490 chapter 15 . 10/23/2008
*Squeal*! :D Yay! They kissed! (Even if drunk ;P)

Can't wait for more!

Update soon! :D
hazlgrnLizzy chapter 15 . 10/23/2008
This was really an amazing chapter!
AmericanWoman chapter 15 . 10/23/2008
Please tell me this isn't another catastrophe about to happen! Jareth has more pride than brains and Sarah speaks before thinking! You can't stay, Sarah? You don't even know why! Stay with him! He loves you, and you're already halfway there! Come on, guys!

As all of those exclamations points should make it pretty obvious, I won't mention again how much I love this story. I'm glad you finally updated, and hope we see another chap soon. Hope your aunt is doing well now. :)
vickster223 chapter 15 . 10/23/2008
Aww love this chapter :-)
Moonspun Dragon chapter 15 . 10/23/2008
Let this be a lesson to us all...never play chess when drunk.:D Nice job please update soon.:D
Ginabella59 chapter 14 . 10/16/2008
oh gosh...why he vanished...

Please update soon.
magialuna chapter 14 . 10/15/2008
OMG and you stop it there? I'm going to lose my mind! This story is so good, so intriguing and has me SO hooked and she asks him if he still feels that way, he leaves and there are no more chapters! I'm going to scream... wait it is 1:30 am.. screaming would wake the family.. AHA I will scream to the author... screams of PLEASE PLEASE MORE! What happens next? Please don't leave me like this! Your story has me SO sucked in and ... ARGH!

Ahem. I humbly beseech you, dearest author, out of the depths of my despair to please continue lest I lose my sanity wondering what next.

Thank you.

By the way, I like your story lots.

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