|Reviews for REM|
| ImagineTheChange chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
This is starting to become a prevalent genre.
This is wonderful, truely inspiring.
You should do more in this area.
| Dardanelle chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
I love texts that find unique ways and combine words in a different way to describe something and conveys an image or an emotion that is spot on. This does just that!
| LocoGreggo chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
| DOC3 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
You continue to amaze and surprise. Loved it!
| heatherberry chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Evocative and touching. The apology is very powerful. I think you have a talent here...don't write off coming back to poetry - please!
| fanofbones chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
beautiful and wow...haunting actually...
| bando2 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I really liked this well done.
| Habita chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Poetry is beautiful, but I have to confess that I find it complicated, thats why I dont use to read it.
I love what you wrote, though. I find it very powerful and, as always, you managed brilliantly to make me feel the emotions with your beautiful words.
Thanks a lot for sharing! :-)
| TheLifeILive chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
That was very good.
I'm not a huge fan of peotry, nor do I profess to know anything about it or be an educated critic. That said, I really enjoyed it!
| Hazmatt chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Very deep and intense! I enjoyed it!
| notmagnificent chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
:D Amazing! The language is beautiful, and Iove the first two lines.
Scarlet slik rivers slip
Throught trembling fingers
Well done, please write more!
| mumrulz chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
It may be from a different sandbox, but it is still pure Lerdo!
Again, so much said, with so little.
**Eyes shaded like dirt and old blood
...definately a Brennan-like thought
**A car coughs;
...always the small details
I haven't mentioned this in a while, but I am glad that creative pit you obviously still have in your backyard, is bottomless. :-):-):-)
| HawkAngel XD chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
| Aching Bones chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
This is just so good and so beautful...from a different sandbox but just the same...
Bones having a dream about trying to stem the flow of Seeley's blood with her fingers and how cold he is getting...the eyes looking back at her are not the choclate brown ones she is used to but those eyes threatened by death and is that an attempt by her to say some semblance of a prayer before she wakes up...
| partsandpieces chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Another beautiful piece of writing - I love your style! The images are so clear, and yet not obvious. "Eyes shaded like dirt and old blood" - Yup, I can imagine that color, and I can imagine Brennan describing a brown that way. Thank you!