Reviews for A Bit Wet
BELLA X STARFIRE7745231 chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
Awesome!:)
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
that was good keep it up
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Loved it!
Cassiakohn chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
man you are awesome! I swear i'm addicted to your writing
mschris44 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Sooo HOT!
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
I think the guys get more out of the three somes than Bella and that just isn't right. Oh well she does get both of them anyway so I guess it's OK. Go for it Bella.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Update soon.
Shineoncindi chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
A BIT wet? yah think? :D
rockcc12 chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
so good i have this great idea where you do a tensome with Alice,Jasper,Bella,Edward,Carlisle,Esme,Emmett,Rosalie,Nessie,Jacob

it would be the lemon king they would all have it together and one person would not be the focus i had this idea for a while i just wanted to share it with somebody who would make it well giving attention to everybody that person is you.
SexyVampire666 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
OMG was this just a one shot ?

Please write another I really enjoyed that.

could u do another one with Carlisle because it makes so good with him in it
jktwi chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
liked it!
Lady Lemon DropxD chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
I'm absolutley in love with all your CarlisleXEdwardXBella stories! There so perfect! )

But can I make a tiny request? Since you pointed out how Carlisle and Edward had "been fooling around" in the pool before they had Bella swim could you maybe make a story of how they "tested" out the pool for Bella? Thanks! xD

Lady Lemon DropxD
carlysweety chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
xD Okay. I believe I've read, like, three of these treesomes for carlisle, bella, and edward of yours. The only thing that comes to mind when I read these is "emo boys" because I always see them kissing and crap. So I think these lemons are pretty hot. (; Every girl likes some guy on guy action, too. Heh. :P
SandKastles chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Nice. But when i read these i can't help but to think "where's esme in all this?" also "where's the other cullens?" So yea where?
mybigteddybearemmett chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
i love pools now it was awesome
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