Reviews for A chance to make it right
Agent Striker chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
cute idea, i liked it
Hotch-Prentiss-fan chapter 2 . 2/1/2010
me gusto mucho esta historia, algo...bueno bastante triste pero a su vez con un final medio feliz

debo serte sincera siempre fui una Kibbs fan pero el TIVA me gusta
zatl chapter 2 . 3/26/2009
the whole time all i was thinking was poor Ziva.
CrazyNinjaChicks chapter 2 . 11/25/2008
So does that mean Ziva is dead? please say no. If she is I will cry so hard please say she is still alive
Jade Wild chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
I just found the story...I know you have written it a while ago, but it's beautiful and heart warming. That was so cute with Tony becoming Ariela's father. really great job :))
crokettsgirl chapter 2 . 7/16/2008
That was a great story. Of course being greedy when I like a story I wish you wrote more to it and had them figure out how Ziva did it. And that she was around and maybe a secret meeting with Tony,, just loved the story...I enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it. Sue
kastle chapter 2 . 6/21/2008
omigosh!:D:Dthat was so great,i'd like a sequel but tis okay if theres not one.
Cable Addict chapter 2 . 6/2/2008
Aw! I loved it! How is it that Ella is Tony's?
Amezzeray chapter 2 . 6/2/2008
loved it

one of my fav Tony stories

DontHaveAGoodUsername chapter 2 . 6/1/2008
Hehe, go Ziva! And Tony...and Elle, etc. Very good! Loved the ending!

-Moriah T.
Pallas.athena-Z2H chapter 2 . 6/1/2008
love it
murmure etoile chapter 2 . 6/1/2008
Hm...Great chapter, but very mysterious! Is Ziva actually alive? How could she change the samples?

You really should write a sequel, with more interaction between Ella, Tony and the team...and maybe with Ziva! They would be soo happy (and me too!)

Anyway, thanks!
Princess456 chapter 2 . 6/1/2008
I loved it but I think you should write a sequel where tony and Ziva get together or something like that ;)
Alinija chapter 2 . 6/1/2008
That was very mysterious.

But I liked it.

And thanks for Ella. I just loved Kate too much, to like Ari.
Balou chapter 2 . 6/1/2008
Great! I expcted a longer fic, but this is lovely!
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