|Reviews for The Legend of Spyro: The Dark Master's Return|
| Lone wolf chapter 9 . 3/10
Well at least this story doesn't have so much negativity n it. There's just one thing bugging me. Why is the word "like" beinn used so much?
| Skychild101 chapter 9 . 3/15/2012
I love it! This was great! Thanks for writing this! To the sequel! Oh! I hope Cynder will be free from her evil form. THat was a nasty thing to do from Malefor who can burn in Hell for all I care. Hmph.
| Skychild101 chapter 7 . 3/15/2012
*gasp* POOOR FALZAR! I hope he gets rid of Malefor though there's a high chance he won't! I wonder where Spyro will land since Igniuts (YAY!) took him to the river to keep him safe by a basket.
When I first read Mark Or dragonlord, for a minute i thought that was Hunter since his body was gold and all... ;p yeah, ignitus and Hunter are my favorites! What about your favorites? Anwyas, great work for this story! Might I ask. Is this the first story then followed by Rise of the Dragons?
| Game Sorcerer chapter 9 . 6/15/2010
Hello. I'm an aquaintace of Holly's. She reccomended this website and a few of its authors. Wow, this was an intense story! I'm at a loss for words! I just gotta say, bravo. It's funny, you and I have the same name! 0:-)
The Sorcerror of all Games- Mark G.
| DragonLord Seth chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
i admit, while you have your downsides (like always putting the stories in bold print) your still a great author.
and the one flaw with this chap (not taking from flyboy) is that spyro's parents didn't name spuro, sparx's parents did (i dont remember their names, i read it on wikipedia, but i never played ANB, I jsut have the second one and DotD)
| Luna Goddess of the Night chapter 9 . 10/7/2009
kinda hard to read here and there, but all in all, really great read! hope to read more
| l-Drago-l chapter 2 . 9/26/2008
This was a hilarious chapter. Dragonlord sounds like a witty character whose personality is one of my favorites.
My only suggestion would be to split the two huge paragraphs into smaller ones, for organization's sake. But other than that, a great story so far.
| l-Drago-l chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
A nice, simple style of writing. I like it.
Leon's personality is already laid out, so we can easily see how he will turn out. I'm for sure going to read the rest of the chapters.
| swordmaster003 chapter 9 . 7/2/2008
Great final boss battle and great ending. Also I liked how you tied set up the events that were going to happen in the first spyro game. One last thing: I like your sense of comedy :).
| swordmaster003 chapter 8 . 7/1/2008
Aw the baby dragons seem cute. The scene soon became intense though at the end when Mark broke the news about Falzar to Elva. This was a great scene which sets up the next events in your story.
| swordmaster003 chapter 7 . 7/1/2008
This was your best chapter yet. I am completly stunned at how detailed this is. You write like a true novelist. I could say that this is the best chapter you ever created but I don't want to rush to soon. You have many more chapters that I have still yet to read. This chapter is the true key that will keep readers wanting more. Unbelivable. Also if I may say this Mark sounds like a chinease or Japenese warrior I have seen in a game I forget who though. But the way Mark fights and the way he stratagizes reminds me of a samurai warrior.
| swordmaster003 chapter 6 . 6/30/2008
Wow, this was really good. I like how mark can go between dimensions. Also this was a great background story to the dark master. Also THE GIANT CHAPTER OF DOOM RETURNS. But I'm ignoring it because I understand that you had problems with the system in making paragraphs.
| swordmaster003 chapter 5 . 6/30/2008
Okay...probally the most violent and bloody chapter I ever read in my life but good all the same.
| swordmaster003 chapter 4 . 6/29/2008
Again, great background story. Only critiscism is that it's short. Nothing major.
| swordmaster003 chapter 3 . 6/29/2008
Nice background story to your chacter (of course I would probally not enjoy living at the beginning of time). Only critcism toward the chapter is that you should use paragraphs. This was a very tough chapter to read because you didn't do that.