Reviews for Underwater |
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![]() ![]() Incest of the cutest kind. Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I saw the last time you updated was April 2011, nooo, I want more to this story, I am so into this pairing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well? When is that eventually chapter?, and I can't figure out with the latest chapter's title, so you have to update a new chapter so that I might get another clue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww, tell me this isn't abandoned! I'll pay you every chapter's worth of review if I have to! (Or cup ramen if you want xD) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omfg I can feel that this story would be good so please, continue my dear author! |
![]() ![]() Please,please,please - update! That was such an interesting,entertaining and, most of all, warm story. It just made me feel good when I was feeling down,please don't give up on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where'd you go?! I didn't read this for awhile after seeing it because of the whole NaruMina thing but I have to admit you made it cute and funny though I'd like to see more on the ideas Naruto has and tries to get back after all he has to have at least one theory by now to try even if it blows up in his face |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I hope you continue writing this story. It is so cute, my first time reading Minato/Naruto fic, but the couple acts so cute together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't read many minanaru fanfictions but they always stop writing it, are you continuing, please do, this story is really good. And is the story called underwater because minato is like being drown in his emotion for naruto o something? |
![]() ![]() Ugh! The best part of your fic is the stupid teaser! And you never updated! Hurry! Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha Minato still have a very long way to go. Hope you will update again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Minster mudt b a saint |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, I do read your omakes. They are very interesting and act as amusing fillers :) I think it's cute of Minato to act in this way. And it'd be quite sad when Naruto returns in the end... It's too bad that happy ever afters are a little hard for time travel fics. On the other hand, you could try for an Alternate Dimension fanfic if you would like a longer lasting MinaNaru fic, or if you don't feel like dealing with the time travel hassle. ANBU captain Minato reminds me of Kakashi! And Minato's current attitude now is something I'd imagine Kakashi having, although Kakashi would be more isolated than he is. I suppose you'll be introducing Tsunade later? Maybe she can be the one that drops the hint to Naruto that Minato likes him... A spelling mistake to look out for: ward off, not ward of. There were some other instances where you wrote 'of' instead of 'off'. |