Reviews for Underwater |
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![]() ![]() ![]() it's a great story! i loved how you portrayed teenage!minato hahahahand naruto,so clueless! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely fantastic. Of course Naruto is as dense as ever...sigh, I wonder when he's going to get a clue... And I love Minato of course, so funny... Anyway, you're writing is awesome, and I like the backward/farward how-it-came-to-be thingys. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg what a cliffy in that preview! i feel like pouting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() U should have Naruto accompany Minato's team on there mission and have some sort of romantic moment, maybe have some hurt!Naruto and protective!Minato |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! The omake was hilarious! And when Naruto met his dad and his breath went 'whoosh', I couldn't help the mental image that went through my mind of Minato glaring straight at Naruto who was shocked and then went,"Whoosh"! Wow! The confused looks on the ANBU's faces would be enough for me to piss myself! You are an awesome writer and I admire you, and this is the first story I ever read on MinaNaru, and I'm actually sarting to like it! Arigatou~~~~ |
![]() ![]() SOOOOO COOOOL I LOVE this story! When will be NEXT? NExt? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe you should have naruto meet Minato's team! Naruto can go on missions, the kyubi can come out in a really bad fight! :) ncalkins |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear 'Faggot', Your intellectual ineptness amuses me because despite the fact I have warnings up, you decided to click into my story to waste your time writing me a message about your small, close-minded opinion. You, doing so, not only shows that you're a moron because you do not understand what a warning is but also proves that you're too much of a coward to leave your pen name or email address. Do not hate on others who have better reading, writing and understanding ability than you can, and ever will attain. Educated, creative people that think outside the box continue to improve and contribute to society far more than imbeciles such as yourself. In saying that, I do not give a 'ass' about your opinion, as you eloquently worded it for it doesn't contain any merit. By the way, it seems you are lacking vocabulary. May I suggest you find yourself something better to do? Perhaps increase your below average IQ points instead of wasting time picking fights. :) Have a lovely day. BR |
![]() ![]() Good thing you stopped writing this monstrosity, you ass clown. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL more like save his verginity (I would say poor Naruto but i acctually wanted to happen -snikers-)hahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() You updated :D can't wait to see the next chapter! Where is everyone? Like iruka, kakashi and kyuubi? U didn't have an omake for this chapter TT |
![]() ![]() Omg you update! (haha I know that it has been a while ago, but I just realize it). This chapter was as good as the others, which I just re-read, just wanted to tell you that this fic is amazing and I really can't wait for the next chapter. Also, one of the things I enjoy the most is how you go back' n forth from past to present, since it makes this fic even more unique. Awesome job! Ps: I want an omake . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Minanaru is so cute~ *A* |
![]() ![]() Oh, im read this story on russian translate and love it very much. Write more, you are amazing |
![]() ![]() hmmmm all hail BlueRedemption hmmmmmm *bows* plz update soon~ ya got me bittin' my nails there so short! |