Reviews for Underwater
yuis chapter 4 . 7/2/2008
My gosh, this is a madcap fic :D The omakes are beyond compare!

There will be much heartbreak when Naruto has to leave - gosh, WHY does he have to leave D: - and so much more heartbreak if Minato finds out what's going to happen to him. dksfskld. If-When Minato actually ends up naming Naruto after Naruto he'd become quite an Ouroburos.

Ahh, I love how you've written young-Minato and mature-Naruto; Naruto still has the lovely Naruto-ness that some other writers just fling to the side when they write him older than in the manga.

Much love for Naruto and Minato, and *twiddles thumbs* I wonder what hijinks they could get up to next ;D
Smortex chapter 4 . 7/2/2008
KYA ~

This is really good :3

I can't wait for the next chapter D

Keep up the good work :)
Sharrina666 chapter 4 . 7/1/2008
It's not bad. Continue. it will be interesting to see where you take this.

i'm putting this on my alert list
hitman33333 chapter 4 . 7/1/2008
Well I'm sorry for taking so long to update, and I'm sorry if this review isn't coherent, as I'm sick right now, and the room is spinning. So sorry, but I gotta end this now, I'll leave another review later, cya.

Oh, and WHOOP
Lord Ringorius chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
_ This is so amazing xD You have me officially addicted to MinaNaru :D

Btw, do you know any other fics with MinaNaru pairing? I found one, but its not as good as urs xD
Shiotamari chapter 4 . 7/1/2008
haha love the Omake, and my friend who is too lazy too get her own account wants me to say good job -
Danni Lea chapter 4 . 7/1/2008
-rolling around laughing-

Anymore need said?
blusum chapter 4 . 7/1/2008
whoop!whoop! go minanaru and so thats how the whole bet started
Taneya chapter 4 . 7/1/2008
I'm enjoying the regular updates! Keep going, you're making this work very well. I don't know HOW you're making this work, but somehow, you are. I look forward to the next update and eventual explanation of the mysterious title.

Cheers,

Taneya
Secludedindarkness chapter 4 . 6/30/2008
HAHAHAHAHAHA nice little omake lol that shits hilarious XD

againI love this story :3 you prolly know that lmao, but I felt like letting you know again :D

I'm hopin for another chappy but I don want you to rush er anything, I mean I'm not the one writing it lol. hahahaha I ramble to much. Good story tho, very good! XD

SID
Love Psycho chapter 4 . 6/30/2008
This is great! I really enjoy this, including the Omakes! This one was good! And, yes Haruno means spring...but Naruto means 'Maelstrom' not fishcake! Common mistake though.

MinaNaru cupcakes!
The Immortal Priestess chapter 4 . 6/30/2008
I have to admit, I don't like yaoi but I like your story. It's well written and funny as well. It was the humor category that made me click the link but I'm happy that I did. Please continue.
MadaMag chapter 4 . 6/30/2008
You know, you are the first one I see to use the term MinaNaru. Even before (and after the name was revealed it was always the 4th)

Danzo, even in Naruto original time is black haired. Or did you talk about another council member (well, it's not really important for the story)

Lemon/smooth. While I don't hate [...]cest, I don't see it for MinaNaru. Romantic love, Mina pinning for Naru, lusting for him, yes. But Naruto know that Mina is his father, and no matter how painful something for Naruto is, he is always doing the right thing in the end. IMHO.

So the only right way (for me) would be, if Naruto would try to comfort Mina, and he would be not full aware of the magnitude of the act. Your Naru is to experienced/intelligent for it to happen this way.

The omake is nice and right size to be read after the main story.
Pampan chapter 4 . 6/30/2008
WHOOP for MinaNaru X3 And I bet he's ghey! XD that last portion was quite cute~ Naruto still at Minato's house even though he moved out. Naruto was lonely too X3
SheWhoHasLostHerMind chapter 4 . 6/29/2008
YAY! *latches onto legs* You are AWSOME! My addiction is sated, for now. I realy like this chapter and thanks for making it long. Poor Naru he didn't know what to expect. Thanks for messaging me back, by the way. It's nice to feel appreciated, if only a little, ne?
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