Reviews for Underwater |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, I can't stop laughing from Naruto's sheer obliviousness :'D he is so cute |
![]() ![]() Update please its sooo good |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good |
![]() ![]() Oh my gosh you need to update please! It's probably been forever but you need to update this story I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is amazing and that preview just wants me to read whats coming so badly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope you are going to update this story, i love it so nuch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the plot. Please continue your work it's wonderful. And the couple is adorable 3 |
![]() ![]() Hello! I remember reading this story some time ago in fact I've re-read it several times. Are you not going to continue? It's a great story and I like this pairing even if it's incest (it's a guilty pleasure), and your writhing is quite good :) hope you can post a chapter explaining the problem |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know u haven't worked on this story in years but please! I really love the story and it needs to be continued |
![]() ![]() I eagerly await the next chapter... and the next, and the next. An the next, and the next... For ever and ever and ever and ever. |
![]() ![]() Its amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to go on a limb and guess that Naruto never finds about Minato's crush before he leaves. And for the title, maybe Minato drowns and ends up forgetting Naruto and people stop mentioning him. Unrequited love is romantic but sad. Thank you for another heart stunning chapter, I hope you are doing well :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your use of different POVs, it's definitely appreciated and now I'm sad for Minato lol. The omake was awesome haha, the Councilwoman was brilliant. Thank you for another lovely chapter :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter, I felt so bad for Naruto. Yeah... Sorry Minato, first impressions and all that jazz. I like your omakes, they definitely add to the story and are a joy to read haha, thank you for writing. |