Reviews for Underwater |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Normally I try to avoid this kinda incest(NejiHina and ItaSasu are fine...) But this...might be interesting enough. Though if the rating climbs to 'M' I will start running screaming for the hills. Cupcakes for you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh gawd if story was an animal I'd nuzzle it XD Hopefully the animal it would be isn't too dangerous ; aah *dies of happiness* I never see to many stories about this pairing X3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() its worthy eenough to be continued! XD |
![]() ![]() hurry up and update already! I'm dieing to find out what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the dark side is indeed a good place to be. It's where, yaoi, hentai, pocky, and all the other good things in life are. This fan girl says yes, please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. It's great. Especially the virgin teenager part hahahahahahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm this got me interested... i mean i know it's just ew but considering the fact tha minato is 17 at this time same with naruto i find it hot somehow...? wow can't exactly decide whether to be bothered or be ok with it... anyway want to try this new angle of relationships... older than naruto is so not ok but with the same age... negotiable... hahaha update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far ) , and the pairing is my favorite too. I really hope you update soon ( on the side note is the Rating gonna change in the later chapters (...like ...LEMONS XD)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fic like this, I've been waiting for. I mean I've been waiting for a fic like this. Good job. ~Grimm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really interesting idea. I've seen other time travel stuff, but this has got to be the first when teenage!Minato hits on Naruto. XD Please do continue. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I think this story is worthy enough to continue. It was so interesting, but I was confused at the beginning a little bit. I had to read it a couple more times for it to register into my un-excersized brain. I give you a ten out of ten for now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit that pairing has never crossed my mind before, but with the time-travel it might just work. I like your characterization of Minato as a somewhat shy teenager and clueless-because-he-knows-it's-his-father Naruto and your writing is a joy to read, good work. Can't wait to see what you're going to come up with, so the story goes on my alert list. |
![]() ![]() You have a few run-on sentences, so take out some commas and put in some periods. But I do think you should continue. It's interesting so far. |
![]() ![]() Slightly cough::majorly::cough 't wait for the next chapter. ::shakes fist:: You better update regularly! I'll go into MinaNaru withdrawl if you don't. Love it. Write more. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() Very nice, Love it. |