Reviews for Underwater |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I thought it was funny. Naruto's so oblivious. And the part after your AN was hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this!please update the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. Seriously. I'm not too good at leaving reviews, so I'll just say, it is very much worthy enough to continue. Please do, it is already developing nicely. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would never discourage the continuation of a min/naru. do go on XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just so good. Continue please |
![]() ![]() I love your fic. I am argentina and I am terrible writting in english but I can understand all that you wrote. Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hai~ this one is very interesting. please do continue. i'd love to read more. it has very good grammatical construction too. |
![]() ![]() I definitely think it has potential. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so much fun to read minato and naruto interactions. Poor minato, i hope naruto won't be too freaked out when he realizes minato's intentions. I'm looking forward to the fleshing out of their relationship in the next chapter. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() this is so romantic but please dont make naruto have to go back to his time it would be so heart breaking. just let them love each sean with naruto over minato's lap was gold. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes continue it, DUH! Its a too good of an idea to pass up! |
![]() ![]() Both of my favorite guilty pleasures - time travel and mina/naru - an excellent, flowing writing style, descriptive without being overwhelming and spot-on dialouge - I think I'm in love! Please do continue this. I can't wait to see where it goes. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh-em-ef-gee. O.O This pairing hadn't even CROSSED my mind before! O.O *gasps* and it's great! addictive! omfg! I guess for the people that are a little squicked by (incest) MINANARU, it's a good idea that you keep it lighthearted and... err... light... in those areas :D . / |