Reviews for Underwater
Wonderfoal chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
I thought it was funny. Naruto's so oblivious.

And the part after your AN was hilarious!
sunako1 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
i love this!please update the next chapter soon!
antlurrs chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I loved this. Seriously. I'm not too good at leaving reviews, so I'll just say, it is very much worthy enough to continue. Please do, it is already developing nicely. _
KageKatt chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
i would never discourage the continuation of a min/naru.

do go on XD
xNeTsUx chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
This is just so good. Continue please
nana chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I love your fic. I am argentina and I am terrible writting in english but I can understand all that you wrote. Keep going!
Lezander chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
hai~

this one is very interesting. please do continue. i'd love to read more. it has very good grammatical construction too.
Wiccachic2000 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I definitely think it has potential. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
osvark chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
It's so much fun to read minato and naruto interactions. Poor minato, i hope naruto won't be too freaked out when he realizes minato's intentions. I'm looking forward to the fleshing out of their relationship in the next chapter. Thanks for writing!
alaina chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
this is so romantic but please dont make naruto have to go back to his time it would be so heart breaking. just let them love each sean with naruto over minato's lap was gold.
AnsemMesna chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Yes continue it, DUH! Its a too good of an idea to pass up!
ChocolateCat07 chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Both of my favorite guilty pleasures - time travel and mina/naru - an excellent, flowing writing style, descriptive without being overwhelming and spot-on dialouge - I think I'm in love! Please do continue this. I can't wait to see where it goes. _
Rice-Ball247 chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
oh-em-ef-gee.

O.O

This pairing hadn't even CROSSED my mind before! O.O *gasps* and it's great! addictive! omfg! I guess for the people that are a little squicked by (incest) MINANARU, it's a good idea that you keep it lighthearted and... err... light... in those areas :D

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