Reviews for Underwater |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I lik the paring a lot. Minato I is so whipped. I do hope Naruto isn't so hopeless. I'm so looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() la storia e divertente peccato ke non scrivi piu sono gia al 2015 e un sacco di tempo un po mi dispiace... |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() why oh why haven't you updated this in so long? It's freaking adorable ): |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, Ok welp here I go. Now this is going to sound bad of me. Really really bad but...could you please somehow mention Sakura? Say Naruto murmurs something in his dream, perhaps a simple 'Sakura' or even a sentence that 'hints' that he 'loves' her? I don't care if at this point in your story Naruto still has a crush on her, or loves her as a sister/teamate/medic-nin, but just imagine Minato's reactions! (cue evil laugh Mwuhahahah) Ahhh Minato's so easy to tease. Perhaps even Naruto has a 'father-son' conversation in which he spills his girl troubles not knowing that Minato would take it the wrong way? Ohh the potential. Who knows - after that Minato might somehow and suddenly develop a hatred towards the colour pink! You could also use Hinata but to be totally honest - Sakura would have more potential. Plus Naruto had a really really bad crush on her and that would be fun to put into play. Haha just imagine a super-duper-uber jealous Minato! Other than that please update soon. I'm not much of an incest person, personally its kinda disgusting, but this is both cute and adorable. Though, a question I do have to ask, what happens if they were to get together? If Minato never married Kushina, and Kushina never gave birth to Naruto, then would Naruto exist or would he suddenly poof away? For that matter of fact, where is Kushina? She hasn't appeared yet and if she had/has a crush on Minato wouldn't there be some loud protesting? And wouldn't Naruto want to search for his mother, and get his mom and dad together? That would actually be a very funny chapter - just imagine Minato's reactions once he realises that Naruto's trying to set him up with Kushina! Also what about the Kyubbi? Would there be two Kurama's or would one be stronger? Or would Kushina's vanish since you said in the story that Naruto still had his healing power. Or is that just an Uzumaki trait? Also I would prefer if you made it so that Naruto remained as oblivious for as long as possible. And if he were to get an inkling to what was happening - he would immediately deny it due to the fact that he couldn't ever imagine dating his dad. Just because oblivious Naruto is adorably funny and cute. Anyways I'll stop my rapid questioning now, and comments, and hope I gave you some inspiration from them. Once again, please update soon. Best Regards, A Rabid Fan |
![]() ![]() ![]() I remember reading this fic a few years back when I didn't have an account to review with xD I recently got back into the Naruto fandom again and remembered this fic and it took me a while to find it again as I had forgotten the name and everything so I was really happy to find it :) I really enjoy the reactions Minato has to Naruto and I hope that our favorite blond gets put on a team and on missions. Also, will we be seeing Kakashi in this? What about Obito, I think he'd look up to Naruto a lot. Anyway, I hope you come back to this fic as it's good and it's an enjoyable read and I feel sorry for Minato xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! I hope you get inspiration for it soon! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() jajajajajajaj, cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm. Has this been truly abandoned? :/ I was just starting to get into it, too. |
![]() ![]() Please update! If you do I'll give oi a piece of my soul! |
![]() ![]() Fuck u ppl Why didn't u upload the next chapter ? Why? I'm crying and screaming and my parents think I'm mad |
![]() ![]() Omg I love Ero Sennin Jiraya and Minato forever I'm my heart |
![]() ![]() Why did you stop updating? It's an amazing fanfic! I wanna cry |
![]() ![]() Ugh |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is adorable I can't wait to read about them together. If your still writing it that is |