Reviews for Another World
Ewonsama chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
this would make one funny story if it were longer. but it was still funny. i can see axel liking the attention but not the fanfics, plus i think roxas would have asked him what gay was and sex and all the other stuff since in the game he barely knew what being best friends meant, but i still like this :D
Raiden-Butt chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Lol i loved this XD it was amazing I loved every part in this lol poor Roxy being hammered by Axel
AllSheNeedsIsLove chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Good, you could take this further. (:
xXFlutterbyXx chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
*gigglesnort* oh jeez, just the idea of Roxas and Axel in this world with all the fangirls...XD
mei lynn 64 chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
haha...-pats axel's back- the translation for roxas's "I hate you so much..." is "OH AXEL! I love you so much too!" lol

really awesome story! hehe...i got my account back from demdem. lol i really loved how axel was all two year oold like when he found out that he and roxas were famous. lmao
123456goodbye chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
that was pretty funny xD i wanna be one of those fangirls that attacked Axel and Roxas! lol xD silly Axel and Roxas of course your famous! why wouldn't you be? pssh u can't use keyblades and portals against crazy fangirls they're just attack you more duh! lol anyway lovealicious fanfic u should make another one like this
Dancing Flurry chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Hey terra! stalker is back. I must say, for a first lemon, its good. Others make them SO bad, I cry. but you actully did a nice job. If you need any help for futur lemons, I have great one apparently, so I could help. Don't hesitate at all, thats what I am here for. Nice story, I would have totally attacked axel, he wouldn't be able to stand for a few days once I had finished with him.


Dancing Flurry
Jayrin Paige chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
XD haha~ Roxas and Axel in the real world. I would have TOTALLY been in that group of fangirls~
poison-maestro chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
lol, that was awsome! very funny, too
Manderamander chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
ah happy story, guess you were in a good mood today huh? :) thats good, ah geez my eyes hurt from reading your other finished story, lol i need to do something about that
DaniJade chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Note To Self: Dimension jumps make Axel EXCEDINGLY horny.

D lol I fell off my chair, which was kinda ow, but in a good way. I think...
MyOwnPersonalDevil chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
aww not crappy, I liked it. ;)
Funeral.Bell chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
This was so cool~

It reminds me of this small comic on DeviantArt. . .


It seems now Roxas discovered, 'The horrors of Fanfiction'

While Axel found, 'Great rape idea's to do on Roxas'

mouse2489 chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
not crappy at all. i liked it -
ShinagiMuramaki chapter 1 . 6/9/2008

I want to see what would happen if they went to an Anime Convention. And people asked for some fanservice. And they got a bit carried away.

Oh god.

m...i'll have to write that now.

But anyway- Thank you for the wonderful story! You are a contribution to the writing world that can never be lost! I need you! WE need you! The Akuroku loving fangirls of the world NEED you!

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