Reviews for Claw
Darth Litarius chapter 6 . 8/11/2011
This was a good story, but it felt a bit rushed. Like a creative writing assignment that you just wanted to get done. More detail could have been given such as what was Claw thinking, what the mindset of the characters was, and most importantly how the heck the evil village chief was able to do his demonic transformation.

You definitely have potential, you just need to put more time in your stories.
Madork Gunna chapter 6 . 4/25/2010
Nice, underrated. Still, I don't think the preds would be overrun that way. Any form of space warfare, such as trying to land on a planet, or even getting near a planet, would be lost by the xenomorphs, due to lacking... well, pretty much everything needed for ship to ship combat. Still, nice fanfic.
Wolfgirl3002 chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Wow! This story is awesome! I love it! Keep up the good work and update soon!