|Reviews for What Matters Most|
| stealth gato chapter 5 . 7/12/2008
so i really hope this doesn't sound mean but i was very dissapointed in this story. you put this under sasunaru, and it was pretty much a straight fic. when most people look up those two, they're expecting yaoi. also it moved really really fast. i was also confused about the game of truth or dare, was it real or a dream or something? also the ending was disappointing and kind of random. i mean yes, sakura was all fan girly but i really didn't expect her to go crazy and kill everyone.
you had a really good idea for this story. but the idea didn't seem to be translated very well in the story. yuki and sasuke didn't really seem to be in love, yeah they almost had sex but that was the only time i actually felt like there was any attraction. also there was nothing between yuki and naruto even though they were supposed to be dating and naruto was supposedly the best thing that had ever happened to her. i think that if you had spent a little more time developing the relationship/love triangle between the three and made sakura more insane and posessive it would have worked.
really sorry if this was mean or offended you in any way. my intention was for cnstructive criticism because i really did like the idea of this story. again, sorry if you thought this was mean. you can send me an angry message telling me off and how you don't care what i think and whatever else you want to say if i did upset you and i won't take offense by it.
| Kitsuneflames chapter 5 . 7/12/2008
THAT was so unexpected. i don't know why but i laughed at the end!
| xXPierceMyHeartxX chapter 4 . 7/12/2008
ok, so when is the whole sasu/naru gonna start and if it isn't a sau/naru story, then why is it in this category,yaoi fans like us get mad when someone does thihs so if it isn't a sasu/naru, please remove it from this area.
| Kitsuneflames chapter 3 . 6/29/2008
no way! I like it non yaoi-ish!
| tactless and lovin it chapter 3 . 6/22/2008
You say you have trouble writing Yaoi fics. I have a solution. I am SasuNaru obsessed, so basically as I was reading your story I thought wouldn't it be funny is Sasuke this entire time, even from the beginning knew that Yuki was Naruto's girlfriend, and that he is currently seducing her to get her away from Naruto? And why pray tell would he do something like that? Because he wants little Naruto all to himself. Yes when reading stories I alter them in my mind to my liking. Anyways theories aside, pretty good fic but you might wanna watch how fast your moving, it feels as though you just keep jumping and I cant keep up, and OC's kinda piss me off, but still, you're not writing for me so, anyways update!
| animatious chapter 2 . 6/2/2008
I'm so confused _ . *pout* Are Sasuke and Naruto gonna end up together?
*points finger at you accusingly* THIS IS A STRAIGHT STORY!
lol jkjk. This story seems really straight though. I think your posting this story in the wrong place because this is the NarutoxSasuke yaoi section of Fanfiction. but non the less its a good story. _ lol