Reviews for Very Dirty
bitemeEdward121719 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
your smut is almsot always fluffy, I love it :D. Anyways I really like this one, don't know why but I just do.
sweetheartboom chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
OMG, thanks for the fave, but I'm no J.K. Rowling compared to you. O.o;

As much as I like this, I don’t.” Edward whined. “I can’t tell if it’s the shower or me that’s getting you so wet.”

EDWARD! AH! MY GOD! ... I still want Jasper. XD You write Twilight lemons like no other and I find it "AH-MAZING!"(my personal pun about something sexual and awesome at the same time! XD)

I totally love this fic. I'm a sucker for shower-smex, to be honest. XD

You're an AH-MAZING WRITER!

-Deidara's Model
AshFF chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
I LOVED IT! OH AND THE SEX IN THE MEADOW, HILARIOUS!
edward luver123 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Oh my! *fans face with hands*

That was very...naughty!

O.O
HeartOfRaven chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Very nice! I love it!
jealousofbella12 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
good! very good so far :D
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
that was very good loved it keep it up!
flower213 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I love sex in the shower! It's the best! And they had pre-sex in the meadow. HAHAHAHA. Nice.
minipoison chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
lemons in a shower... naughty naughty! hahahahah

jordan
spacebound1317 chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
hottness ]

B
scabbedwings13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Makes me want a nice hot shower. Very well written.

x
Chi Cullen chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
YAY! NEW ONE-SHOT!

You know how much I love your one-shots and this is no exception!

I absolutly LOVE the lines ' “Bella, Bella, Bella,” he shook his head, the grin never faltering. “I intend to make love to you on any and every surface of this planet. Your father’s shower is no exception.” '

THAT'S AWESOME! Hahahahahaha!

Amazing job, as always!

Chi_
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
HOT!
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
i love it
isacz chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
LOVE it! great job! :);):)
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