Reviews for Very Dirty
HeartOfRaven chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Very nice! I love it!
jealousofbella12 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
good! very good so far :D
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
that was very good loved it keep it up!
flower213 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I love sex in the shower! It's the best! And they had pre-sex in the meadow. HAHAHAHA. Nice.
minipoison chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
lemons in a shower... naughty naughty! hahahahah

jordan
spacebound1317 chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
hottness ]

~B
missscareall chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Makes me want a nice hot shower. Very well written.

x
Chi Kartalia chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
YAY! NEW ONE-SHOT!

You know how much I love your one-shots and this is no exception!

I absolutly LOVE the lines ' “Bella, Bella, Bella,” he shook his head, the grin never faltering. “I intend to make love to you on any and every surface of this planet. Your father’s shower is no exception.” '

THAT'S AWESOME! Hahahahahaha!

Amazing job, as always!

~Chi_
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
HOT!
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
i love it
isacz chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
LOVE it! great job! :);):)
curlyk03 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Oh goodness, that was wonderful.

Thank you.
HoldOnTight28 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
This was awesome. You're a very talented writer.
LondonMarie chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Good Job
smilelikeacullen chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
okay i totally loved this you have got to continue this foreverish cause i loved it!
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