Reviews for Very Dirty
scabbedwings13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Makes me want a nice hot shower. Very well written.

x
Chi Kartalia chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
YAY! NEW ONE-SHOT!

You know how much I love your one-shots and this is no exception!

I absolutly LOVE the lines ' “Bella, Bella, Bella,” he shook his head, the grin never faltering. “I intend to make love to you on any and every surface of this planet. Your father’s shower is no exception.” '

THAT'S AWESOME! Hahahahahaha!

Amazing job, as always!

Chi_
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
HOT!
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
i love it
isacz chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
LOVE it! great job! :);):)
curlyk03 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Oh goodness, that was wonderful.

Thank you.
HoldOnTight28 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
This was awesome. You're a very talented writer.
LondonMarie chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Good Job
smilelikeacullen chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
okay i totally loved this you have got to continue this foreverish cause i loved it!
ItachiUchiha17 chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Fantastic
MinniMuffin chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Awesome! Very well written! Hot!
bloodwhore chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I SERIOUSLY need to take a cold shower.

Like, NOW.

Preferably with Emmett...

xD

Very good!

XO,

Rose.
Rider Arya Svit-kona chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
haha wow... Umm that was pretty steamy there. lol It's good. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Arya
sirodro chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
What a talent you are! Loved your attention to detail...more please? Very interested to see where this is going. Keep it coming love!
Night script chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
whoa.. I think I need a shower too... but cold... damn that was hot and sexy...
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