Reviews for The Other Swan
nbrian72 chapter 14 . 3/1/2012
WOW! Never thought abella had it in her.
xxPrettyLittleWriterxx chapter 14 . 11/20/2011
coolieo i was though hoping u would have more done but it is realllllllllllllly good
Sol Spell Diggory chapter 14 . 3/19/2010
It was really a cute chap...

Nice to know what Edward felt...

Poor him...

And I felt a bit sorry about for the baby

He didn't have fault that he was made...

But Bella was right...

She never wanted him!

Update it soon, please!
Mrs. Nicole Malfoy chapter 14 . 3/19/2010
damn...

plz update son.
DOOLIN chapter 12 . 3/19/2010
SWEET!
Melly Black chapter 14 . 3/18/2010
oh please update soon I realy want to see what happened and a fallow up store seem Like a really cool idea. CAn't wait for more.
Tabpire chapter 14 . 3/18/2010
love
Mrs. Nicole Malfoy chapter 13 . 11/13/2009
I like it plz plz plz update already!
tammar chapter 13 . 10/7/2009
love love this story
jess chapter 13 . 10/1/2009
in the end i think it could be edwards child instead of jacobs. Love this story
bbtasha chapter 13 . 9/23/2009
I liked it very much! Thanks for the update! Anxious for more!
Sol Spell Diggory chapter 13 . 9/22/2009
It was... wow!

I feel sorry for Sophia, but hell! They should have told Bella!

Well, I can't really be mad with Edward... He couldn't tell, it wasn't his business!

Update it soon!
Chrystal06921 chapter 13 . 9/21/2009
well i really hope to hear more. This is going to be a great story. I cant wait for you to update more!
bbtasha chapter 12 . 9/10/2009
Yay! I still like this story very much. So glad you found time to update! Good chapter! :)
Music of the wind chapter 12 . 9/10/2009
I love this story please keep writing. I wonder how Bella is going to take Jacob imprinting
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