Reviews for Shadow Phantom
majin patrick chapter 5 . 7/28/2013
Still so lost right now
majin patrick chapter 4 . 7/28/2013
I hate cliffhangers
majin patrick chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
I'm so lost right now
majin patrick chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
Is this gem by any chance a chaos emreld
Guest chapter 5 . 6/13/2013
Merr.
Rebecca chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
Your a HE?! But I thought only girls liked My Little Pony!
Rebecca chapter 2 . 9/30/2012
Oh Crudmuffins. DANNY GIVE SHADOW THAT CHAOS EMERALD! SHADOW IS IMMORTAL SO YOU CAN'T KILL HIM HE'S ALSO NOT A GHOST!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
WHY DID YOU MAKE ME LOSE!'!'

You should be roboticized

From the ultimate life form
Guest chapter 2 . 9/25/2012
Me that's who will win

From the ultimate life form
TatlTails chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
So far, you've made a really good story. My only real complaint is that you used no periods whatsoever. They are a kinda imortant piece of punctuation. But the story itself was pretty great. Now to read the rest of it.
OMNISENSE95 chapter 2 . 12/26/2011
Again, too many run-ons. And the ghostly wail is NOT Danny's signature attack. I think.
OMNISENSE95 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Let me say this: There were WAY to many run-on sentences in that chapter. If it sounds like it can stand alone as a sentence, then let it be a sentence.
Bluemew22 chapter 2 . 1/12/2011
The 2nd paragraph is completely void of punctuation.

I quite enjoy the premise thus far.
Kitsuneyukikumori chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
I loved this story
Starscream'sAngel chapter 5 . 7/17/2009
I love it! it's the best I swear it is THE best fan fic I've read on this site
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