Reviews for Unavoidably
Victoria Malloy chapter 2 . 11/23/2015
part 3 please
Serena Milton chapter 2 . 2/1/2012
This was a really good stroy. I lived how well you described the Marisa/Asriel bond. I love this couple and I loved this story. Great job :)
Account Vacated chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
beautiful...but so sad at the same time..
Tides of Gray chapter 2 . 1/11/2010
absolutely stunning. loved it so much...marisa is just a fascinating character. Great work
Ieyre chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
This was a very probable situation for the characters. I found it sad, wistful...the prose had the right mixture of sexuality and shame.
gayeffie chapter 2 . 7/10/2008
wow

this made me cry

im writing my own Marisa/Asriel fanfic

if u want u could check it out.

:D
Guest chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
that was lovely. a nice peak into their realtionship. I thought it was perfect.
Mrs.Scott323 chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
That was beautiful, a bit sad, but still very beautiful!
StarMan-01 chapter 2 . 6/6/2008
Wow, this is very well written.

I don't usually go in for the romance side of things, but this one was so well done that I got from start to finish without a single cringe. Great work.

I'm now starting your longer fic, hope to see more of the same kind of writing.

-StarMan.
Lamppostshines chapter 2 . 6/4/2008
i actually have an account but logging in would be a pain.

Nice story! Great job on it!