Reviews for The Demon Chronicles
Harlequin chapter 15 . 3/20/2013
Just finished this, and I have to say, it is absolutely AMAZING. I love your writing style, how you tie the different continuities together, the backstories of the Demon Lords everything! I noticed you've started writing again, and while I know you may have moved on to different stories, I still sincerely hope you come back to finish this.
MitzvahRose chapter 15 . 6/12/2012
T-That wa-as beautiful... *Cries* P-please tell me your planning on continueing? Exspecially Beelzemon's? I loved it, and I hope you write more about them. *Smiles sadly*
Guest chapter 15 . 10/18/2011
Wow. This story has me characterization with in-depth, complex thoughts and motivations. Time travel and dimensional crossing can become really confusing, though. I wish you hadn't abandoned it.
Guest chapter 15 . 10/18/2011
Wow. This story has me characterization with in-depth, complex thoughts and motivations. Time travel and dimensional crossing can become really confusing, though. I wish you hadn't abandoned it.
Anon chapter 6 . 10/7/2011
Is Gallantmon from the Tamer's Realm?
Eleos Argentum chapter 15 . 10/19/2010
Oh, boy... Please tell me you are going to continue this...

Really I love your fic. Your style is awesome. The way you handle the characters, emotions... how you built their stories and intertwined tehm... the way you handle sounds...

Please, keep this fic going. or at least finish it! Pretty please?
goggleboy4444 chapter 15 . 9/22/2009
Shit you know I read this the day it came out, and I thought I had reviewed, and it says I didn't so I feel like a dick...My apologies.

I remember not liking this originally, but now I see no basis for it. I think it was more me being on a full stomach and reading that lovely description displeased my stomach for some reason.

I look back on it and find the eating to drinking metaphor really well played on your part. I love the; “I...” He grabbed his mouth, eyes slowly – carefully, tiredly – narrowing. “No. No, no, no. I promised to stop doing this. I promised them.” line it just makes it all come together really nicely.

Clearly it wasn't a memorable chapter, but I practically loved the dialogue on this one. "Bah. Friggin' A" something about that just makes me grin.

Sometimes your description is beautiful. Sometimes it grosses me the fuck out. Still... Damn that ugly
themostdarkestheart chapter 9 . 9/13/2009
this story is really awesome. I know, it might be weird for someone to start at such a late chapter when looking into a story, and I accidently found this one when researching about the seven demon lords of digimon and... I got caught. really caught. The story of Lilithmon, who was the partner of Hikari Yagami once, a lifetime ago it seems, was truly touching me with all the vivid images. I will also take a look into the other chapters and... I am happy that there are still good fanfics out there, ones who have new ideas and try to deal with things that are not written down yet in this form.
Goggleboy4444 chapter 15 . 9/12/2009
Hey its me in I don't feel like logging in form. Anyway I can't believe how much you were able to blow my mind. I mean I saw that the chapter was under 30 words and seriously w0w. I have to say I am admiring the way you write, as in the artistic form the way you put words screen...

Dug the chapter...not cool that you didn;t resond to my reply to your review reply...


goggleboy4444 chapter 14 . 9/9/2009
Well you did not respond to me last time, but judging from this chapter you took some of my advice...(I hope, maybe I just got lucky) You did not have to have any real fighting because GranDracmon could have simply left when he told Leviamon he killed Hikari. Though it seems you kept him around long enough to have a nice little sparing match. I approve, nicely done.

Liked the chapter, curiously enjoying everyone becoming good, its cool, witty, original...Creative

I want to bring up something about your personification of digimon. I know they are in many ways just as human as we are, but I think sometimes we push it to far. We give digimon that have had little or no contact with humans, human sayings. I mean for example, Leviamon in this chapter refers to himself as the Creme de la Creme of GranDracmon's pawns. Don't you think thats a bit much? I mean digimon don't say; Its raining cats and dogs, or, Speak of the devil... I think there can be exceptions, but really only in my mind for partnered digimon who are exposed to human idiocy. Thats a stretch in my mind too, but less of one. I don't know just something to think about while the demon lords destroy galaxies there not going to say, "Lets rock and roll!"


Dameus chapter 14 . 9/9/2009
Lord Pata chapter 14 . 9/9/2009
Tell me this isn't true! Tell me you didn't killed Kari! T_T

How could you! Poor Kari, poor Gatomon (Lilithmon) you love to make the character suffer huh? o.o
goggleboy4444 chapter 13 . 9/6/2009
Seriously I would not to be on the other end of a verbal argument with you. I already knew of your healthy vocabulary, but your insults are scary... Everything from pussboil, to FUCKER go BOOM...Jeez...Though I like it all of it.

I was confused about the giant gun and Barbmon's death, other than that very nice!

My real complain was Alex going from such a tough guy and then just quitting... Pretty anti climactic. A good fight, quick or not would have been nice. You seem to like to avoid major conflict in the story. One thing after another prevents things from boiling over the top...
goggleboy4444 chapter 12 . 9/3/2009
sorry for the late review...well 2 days isnt too too bad. Gotta say loved it, great twists, great turns. I love Demon's immature, yet serious approach and Patamons sort of serene take on the whole thing.

Ken felt a little off to me, i felt he would say a little more. Be a little more logical on the situation and a little less Brave per say...

Nice chappie

your super awesome omega buddy

Lord Pata chapter 12 . 9/2/2009
Amazing chapter, I feel so bad for Patamon, you can tell he loves her more than a friendship, the way he looked at her, how he took longer to cross the portal, he misses her a lot, I'm sure it was hard for him to recognize her as Lilithmon, mostly after all the years they shared together as friends, battling as Angemon and Angewomon, as Pegasusmon and Nefertimon, even as Patamon and Gatomon.

No doubt Gatomon and Patamon share a so deep bond that from there to turn it into a deep love (romantic one) for each other wouldn't be anything rare.

Beyond anything in common they would have like their angel forms, their armor forms or their crests, they have that genuine care for each other plus that both understand what the other has gone through

I so love that couple, it seems I'm one of the very few ones that can see how they could work as couple without using the angels thing or the crests thing XD

But I can see you can see it too in the way you wrote this chapter.

It also was interesting the brothers confrontation between Patamon and Demon, is ironic how the brother who stopped his brother's attempt to conquer the digiworld was the one who ended as a Demon Lord.

At last I see someone who gives Patamon more depth to his character, the poor guy deserves a bit more depth than just being the playful one or just battle on his higher forms
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