Reviews for A World Without Sound
Paradizei chapter 8 . 8/29
You are an amazing writer
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21
It's WHOA, not WOAH. Look it up if you don't believe me.
ToMyMuse chapter 22 . 7/15
I appreciate your writing skills. You’re very talented. Thank you.
Honestly, though, I could barely get through the last 2/3 of this story because it felt like it totally went off the rails starting in Paris. The characters’ actions, reactions, and decisions about very serious events felt rather haphazard, flighty, and irresponsible. I’m sorry. I rarely leave negative reviews, so I’m uneasy posting this, especially since this story was published so long ago. I know many people would just tell me, “If you don’t like it, you don’t have to read it.” Very true, so I guess I liked it enough to want to finish reading it. Maybe it’s the completionist in me.
AlexandraaCullen chapter 1 . 2/23
So I left some reviews earlier and have been thinking about it all day, worrying I came across really aggressive or rude but that wasn’t my intention, I just felt this story went in a direction I personally didn’t agree with but I hope my reviews weren’t mean. Especially since this story was written so long ago. I know I have stories written on my profile from when I was fourteen (which are not well written and could have been improved on now haha) anyways thanks for sharing regardless!
AlexandraaCullen chapter 20 . 2/23
Okay okay nope. A deaf baby is NOT fucked up. Deaf people are not broken and they do not need to be fixed. I think I have to stop reading. There was some previous stuff I was thinking seemed a bit off but this is definitely isn’t right. I think yes having a baby with a disability can be hard to navigate at first because it’s different but that’s why they should have had this baby discussion prior to getting married. And having sex means there is always a chance of a baby even while taking precautions. While they may not want the extra hardships that come with being deaf for their child, they cannot control that and it doesn’t mean a deaf baby is “fucked up”. So disappointed. I think this story had a lot of potential because your writing is great but unfortunately there a few beliefs Tied to this that can be harmful for the deaf community
AlexandraaCullen chapter 19 . 2/23
They never talked about kids before getting married? Mmm that wasn’t too wise. I feel like Bella is about to have her heart broken with this. Can’t imagine yet why Edward doesn’t want this baby
AlexandraaCullen chapter 18 . 2/23
Why would they need a urine sample after she fainted after the news of her husband being in a coma? And why did they test for pregnancy? Usually routine tests don’t include pregnancy at least they never have for me unless you specifically ask for for them to test for HGC levels
AlexandraaCullen chapter 16 . 2/23
Also thank god all Edward’s family came after! Why weren’t they waiting with her for the initial 24 hours of the surgery? Poor Bella!
AlexandraaCullen chapter 16 . 2/23
Why would they need a urine sample after she fainted after the news of her husband being in a coma? And why did they test for pregnancy? Usually routine tests don’t include pregnancy at least they never have for me unless you specifically ask for for them to test for HCG levels
AlexandraaCullen chapter 15 . 2/23
I know this is a fictional surgery but I’m a bit confused why they would go down such a risky path when cochlear implants do exist and which is a minimally invasive surgery that can be done to implant a small electronic device that helps the person hear electronically. It’s not the same way hearing people can hear but it’s a solution if that’s something a deaf or hard of hearing person wants. I don’t really understand why Edward suddenly seems to want this now, I’m starting to think that as a writer it seems like you’re writing this story under the assumptions deaf people need to be fixed when in reality they aren’t “broken.” I’m hearing so I don’t want to step on any toes but that’s what I’m beginning to see while reading.
AlexandraaCullen chapter 14 . 2/23
Wow a lot happened in this chapter!

I’m not from France but where I live you don’t usually get lap dances in public unless you’re at a strip club haha so that was very bold of them!

I cannot even imagine someone who was supposed to be be my friend say “someone was going to rape me and I was going to like it” that shocked me and in a really bad way. I can’t believe Edward even said that, where did that even come from? Those are some seriously hateful words and you can tell he’s jealous of her going to some other guy’s house but I cannot envision any life long friend say Sisk thing so hateful and violent. I don’t know how I’d even forgive someone after they said something so fundamentally not okay. What Bella said also wasn’t nice in response but the sexual assault comment really shocked me. Just completely out of line.

Also I’m shocked Edward is asking to marry Bella already? Unless I’ve gotten the timeline wrong, they are in their first year of college and have been living together since June which was only a week or two after they confessed their feelings? So now it’s November, so they have been only been together for 6 months?
AlexandraaCullen chapter 13 . 2/23
So sweet of Esme and Carlisle to give them tickets to Paris!
AlexandraaCullen chapter 12 . 2/23
If Bella was that sore Edward was definitely too rough haha
AlexandraaCullen chapter 6 . 2/22
Aw poor Edward but I’m glad he has someone who is there for him!
Lillywhite1 chapter 22 . 5/15/2021
Thanks for writing this wonderful story!
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