I LOVE reading stories that just make me smile at the characters :) I love them!

Second time reading your story. *sigh* still in love with it!

Hi! How are you? Its been a long time sice I read this story for the first time and I found miself remembering it last week so I decided to read it again... I wasnt disapointed at all Ive love this as much I did the first time I read it. I was wonthering if you writed the sequel as you promise that you will... I couldnt find it in your profile...

So far I really like this story

can you please give me the link of the sequel? i cant find any on you profile...

Gah! could they be any cuter? Can't believe they could be so mean to one another during that fight, but they more than make up for it with thier googly eyes and groping and getting engaged in Paris.

aww, could they be any cuter and gooier? Is that a word?

Yeah. Good luck with that. They are probably so flustered and red, it's a give away. Nice try tho.

omg I can' t stop the goofy smile on my face. that was too cute, and the mental image of a dazzeld little edward is too cute.

Where is this sequel you speak of?

OMG she was hilarious as a kid. too bad she doen't have the same courage now.

I already reviewed ch. 3 once, so here's ch. 3:

That is the best version! Have you heard the mash up of his Over the Rainbow and Jason Mraz's I'm Your's? It's so good. that's what I imagined playing in this chapter. I'm reading this for the second time, btw, and still loving it. They are so cute and I love that Alice didn't realize she won.

And 4:

I love them together. It breaks my heart that she's whispering I love you and he has no clue. It cracked me up when he called her an annoying little thing. And is there an outtake of Alice and Jazz somewhere? I love those two.

i'm really happy with the choice you made for your story... i'm absolutely pro-choice in the abortion matter but in this case i think it was freaking wrong and cruel! they almost killed their baby for A POSSIBILE disability. if everyone did the same there woulnd't be babies anymore. and come on! he's a teacher at deaf school...does he think all his students would have been better off not being born? does he think all people with a disability think 'my mother sould have aborted me'? better dead than deaf? is that how he feels? because it seems to me that even if he had a difficult childhood, it was pretty happy too...and he has a great life. he has something that not all 'normal people' find: love. does he really think all the love he's getting from his family, friends and wife, is not whorthed the obstacles his disability creates? and let's not forget the baby could be perfectly healthy.

Very cute story! I like it, however the issue with sign language keeps coming up and its starting to make it hard for me to read without getting irritated.
Sign language uses the entire body, not just the hands. Different signs mean different things depending on where you form them on the body. For instance, the sign for girl is a hand motion that involves running your hand down your cheek. Sooooo you couldn't make that sign without someone facing you.
Cute, but I mean it bothers me that you didn't bother to do any research about what sign language is before writing this...

This really does sound like such a sweet story :) eager to finish it now!