|Reviews for A World Without Sound|
| Rainstar148 chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
ah, so awesome! I've never read a story like this, and you word it out very well. You have my praise( though it doens't really mean that much _') lol, anyway, this is an awesome story!
| FloweredEnchantment chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
oh, wow, that was so sad! I liked your portrayal of Renee though. I think that it was in character. Really everyone is true to the original character here! But anyway, I hope you get your 69 reviews soon, because I can't wait for the next chapter!
| delusional-pumpkin chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
Awe...a frustrated Edward. How sad. Your story is..wow. There really aren't words to describe. lol. You have a great style of writing. Keep it up.
| KimberlyCullen chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
OMG I love this story its completly different from the other fanfics out there. Your doing a good job of twisting the story while keep with the character good job update soom please
| Rainstar148 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
AMAZING! this story has a very unique plot, and I LOVE that! It always surprises me about the ideas that people can come up with (my imagination sux T_T) But, I'm moving on to the next chapter! :D
| kingdomfantasyanime453 chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
poor edward!...poor bella!
its so sad they have to face this kind of problems...
| EmeraldSeaFrost chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
Great story update soon...
| Bufster chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
poor edward [
it must be hard not being able to use not just one sense, but two
he has bella to help him though ]
update son please
| DiamondSkin chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
Wonderful chapter! So full of comfort... and DRAMA! And I absolutely LOVE drama!
First of all, I felt so incredibly bad for Bella. In the books, Renee has always seemed a bit selfish to me (though Bella is as well). She seems to want to put guys (and her own personal pleasures) ahead of Bella, and though she loves her dearly, it often overpowers that. Just a comment... and you've got the Renee character perfectly.
Secondly, I hate, hate, HATE Lauren Mallory. How DARE she do that to poor Edward, when he obviously wanted her to stop? I can't wait to find out what kind of story she conjures up to justify telling her boyfriend that Edward hit her. Better yet, have Bella pounce her the next day at school, ok?
And on the EPOV, if you have the time, doing the entire story (or a slightly condensed version) would be my vote. I think that a lot of people would read it!
| Kairianna864 chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
Oh my gosh! I feel so bad for Edward! He can't help it. And that witch Lauren! ARG! She is so annoying and mean. Can't wait for your next chapter! Hope you get your 69 reviews.
| lia516 chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
Great chapter. I can't imagine how frustrating that would've been not being able to tell her to stop. She better not pull something sleazy and lie about what happened, claiming Edward came on to her. That would be just like her, she's such a witch.
Edward and Bella are so perfect together and I can't wait until they finally admit it to each other.
| Dark Shining Light chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
Sounds great! just update asap ok?
| blinding-rainbows chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
oh my goodness, that was emotional!
and now you have me even more excited for your next chapter!
and i think that's a good idea, about the Edward POV chapters.. i really want to read one! :)
there. now you only need, what, 68 reviews?
| GothamPeasant chapter 6 . 6/15/2008
ah thats so sad T-T
| lia516 chapter 5 . 6/15/2008
How cute that Bella proposed. It's even better that nobody lets her forget it. How cute is it that Carlisle calls her wifey, I love it. My son is five and I can totally see him doing something like that.
It amazes me at how oblivious those two are to each others feelings. Especially with Alice and now Emmett saying things to Bella. You know that if they say things to her, then they're saying things to Edward. I'm sure that if they hadn't been best friends since they were five, they would be more open to the idea. It's just so frustrating.