|Reviews for Seeing Things|
| Crismebella chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
When will he learn not to bet against Alice? Soon, I think. I really liked your story, you did a very good job. Well written.
| Rakusa chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Oh I love it, I'm trying to remember what Bella was thinking then, considering he was gone for a week and the rest of the siblings weren't, and she was definitely not romanticizing vampires, hehe... It also made me realize that Edward likes to run, and not just because he's fast. He ran when he decided he wanted to feed on the criminals before the rest joined them and it was just Esme and Carlisle (think Rose was there yet? Alice and Jasper definitely weren't). He ran when he encountered Bella for the first time. He ran when Bella was in danger and he wanted her to run with him, away from the trio. He ran when Jasper almost killed Bella, and I feel like he wanted to run again to avoid changing her and protecting her from the Volturi (twice actually, but the first time was an extension of the Jasper incident)...
| meeroom16 chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
I really loved this story- please keep writing it. I love Emmett and Esme and really enjoyed the way you portrayed the Cullen family dynamic!
| bananafox chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
| Lumikki chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
It was really sweet and lovely and nice and defenitely worth to read!
| Epic Styled Rug chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Wow! I love this! It would of been awesome if this happened in the books!
| Lori94 chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
OMG! I loved it! I think you should go a bit further! Next chapter could be 'I told you so'! LOL!
| Silkie chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Again, really enjoyable. I have to say I'm loving Esme's POV.
| Citizen of Volterra chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
that was great! I loved that last line:
Only Alice still looked upset. Looking down, she muttered dejectedly, “But he looked so happy.”
| Aldara Gaea chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
yeah... just a little bit beyond believeable, but a great idea to explore, regardless. I love how you ended it-why don't you write from Alice's pov? I think you'd really be able to do her justice. A lot of people get carried away with how preppy she always is, but I think you'd be able to get the balance right.
| Sleeping Lullaby chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
I love it!
Especially: “Well, I don’t know what’s weirder – a vampire kissing a human’s throat or Edward kissing a girl! Never thought I’d see either one! ..."
Omg Emmet just craked me up xD
I loved the part at the end when Alice said something like "But he looked so happy" as well. It's just so sweet
And Edward ..
Ow, Edward ... Our sweet, little, perfect, dazzling, bronze-haired Virgin ... How we love him xD
No but seriously, great story ;)
| GenerallyGeorgia chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
I love it! its awesome! i love your stories. i just finished rereading all my faves. that was fun!
| Melinda the Proud Bookworm chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
I'd love to hear the continuation on this. The vision come to life and the family's take on it.
| RebeccaMCullen chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
That was cute.
| ML chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
That was perfectly lovely! I especially liked Edward sarcastically saying he could sing a lullabye and Alice's closing remark-adorable! And nicely written!