Reviews for A Simple Twist of Fate
x2leoj chapter 123 . 10/19
Good story, but very dragged out, Palpatine dying was pretty much the ending for me, didn’t need many chapters after that.
pub4 chapter 123 . 10/17
I really enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
pub4 chapter 109 . 10/17
Chapter 109 - I'm reading this and thinking that Padme is the weakest woman ever. Parents miss their kids' birthdays all the time for work. Anakin didn't torture his prisoner, and I don't think that so far we have enough to even think he is turning to the dark side again. If he is, then this is really weak writing, but so far it's good enough to keep me interested this far in. It's just that throughout this entire story, Padme seems to be the neediest woman. Anakin is pathologically possessive of her, but they seem to work around that alright. But tbh, I'm disgusted with her character atm.
halera99 chapter 122 . 9/26
Amazing! Simply amazing! I really enjoyed your story.
VoldiesBedroomSlippers chapter 123 . 8/29
A thoroughly enjoyable read! Thanks for all your time and effort in writing it. I look forward to perusing some of your other work as well.
A fanfic reader chapter 111 . 6/26
After readings many of your stories multiple times, I have come to the conclusion that you are very good at writing fanfic. I think that the story is very good, but I liked the beginning much better than the end due to the fact that Padmè is overreacting and that Anakin is in the right. He is running an empire! While I understand her concerns regarding the Death Star, she left with the children because missing the birthday party was the supposed last straw. They are going to have plenty more birthdays, I've had a parent miss my birthday and while I missed them I never thought that it was the end of the world. Also Obi-Wan is definitely on Padme's no matter what he says otherwise. In my opinion that after taking control of the Death Star, the story really took a turn for the worst. Anyways end of rant, I am still a loyal fan and I don't think that the story is bad, just a bit, for lack of a better word, confusing.
Guest chapter 69 . 4/26
Guest chapter 66 . 4/24
I personally dont like vader out of the suit.
thelegend27 chapter 54 . 4/12
Oh shoot
Guest chapter 69 . 4/11
Boo, kenobi never said "hello there! "
Guest chapter 63 . 4/9
I love all your fanfics, but this one is definitely my favorite. You aren't afraid to add jeopardy to the story, even when it may make the storyline difficult for you to follow.
I really respect your writing. Honestly, this seems likke some non canon star wars novel. Thanks for your writing!
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Analyn Rockwand chapter 9 . 12/30/2017
And like that, you lost me.
Padmé being alive? Hating Anakin? I can't stomach those kind of stories. I mean, Anakin still loves her, Why can't they have a happy family, damnit?!
Guest chapter 123 . 12/25/2017
Great story a joy to read keep up the good work
DawnthePretender chapter 27 . 12/18/2017
Okay I was really feeling this story, but seeing how Leia is always right ALL THE TIME is really annoying. I just feel like you aren’t giving Luke enough credit and allow Leia to be the character to smooth things over every time there is an issue. Even when she overreacts Vader praises her. Other than that the progression is spot on but I am going to have to stop reading.
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