Reviews for A Simple Twist of Fate
A fanfic reader chapter 111 . 6/26
After readings many of your stories multiple times, I have come to the conclusion that you are very good at writing fanfic. I think that the story is very good, but I liked the beginning much better than the end due to the fact that Padmè is overreacting and that Anakin is in the right. He is running an empire! While I understand her concerns regarding the Death Star, she left with the children because missing the birthday party was the supposed last straw. They are going to have plenty more birthdays, I've had a parent miss my birthday and while I missed them I never thought that it was the end of the world. Also Obi-Wan is definitely on Padme's no matter what he says otherwise. In my opinion that after taking control of the Death Star, the story really took a turn for the worst. Anyways end of rant, I am still a loyal fan and I don't think that the story is bad, just a bit, for lack of a better word, confusing.
Guest chapter 69 . 4/26
Guest chapter 66 . 4/24
I personally dont like vader out of the suit.
thelegend27 chapter 54 . 4/12
Oh shoot
Guest chapter 69 . 4/11
Boo, kenobi never said "hello there! "
Guest chapter 63 . 4/9
I love all your fanfics, but this one is definitely my favorite. You aren't afraid to add jeopardy to the story, even when it may make the storyline difficult for you to follow.
I really respect your writing. Honestly, this seems likke some non canon star wars novel. Thanks for your writing!
LucariosLove chapter 1 . 1/4
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Analyn Rockwand chapter 9 . 12/30/2017
And like that, you lost me.
Padmé being alive? Hating Anakin? I can't stomach those kind of stories. I mean, Anakin still loves her, Why can't they have a happy family, damnit?!
Guest chapter 123 . 12/25/2017
Great story a joy to read keep up the good work
DawnthePretender chapter 27 . 12/18/2017
Okay I was really feeling this story, but seeing how Leia is always right ALL THE TIME is really annoying. I just feel like you aren’t giving Luke enough credit and allow Leia to be the character to smooth things over every time there is an issue. Even when she overreacts Vader praises her. Other than that the progression is spot on but I am going to have to stop reading.
Jadaerys chapter 21 . 11/11/2017
Ania Kinsky :)) i can’t remember how many times i’ve read this fic but it’s only now i noticed the name without the second a, heheh
The Harrinator chapter 110 . 10/7/2017
This chapter is up to its eyelids in bullshit. Anakin is completely in the right with this, or at least he was up until he became a great big sobbing pussy. Fucking Padme overreacted, and I can not believe that Anakin is going to just fold like that. God forbid the man makes a choice Padme disagrees with without her fucking jumping off the deep end. I can't read this anymore.
aniPANDA chapter 1 . 8/25/2017
I read everybody's reviews, and I also think Padmé is acting a bit weak. But in her defense, she has twins and is pregnant with another set of twins on her own. I also do feel kind of bad for Anakin, because his wife just left him, took away his kids, and then acts like it's his fault. I feel like Sola's plan all along, was to drive Padmé away from Anakin.

I hate Sola
nekochan1994 chapter 1 . 8/6/2017
Quick corrections: Tattoine is very poor so cake for birthdays on a planet where water is expensive would probably not happen. Also a school trying to do a Fundraiser probably wouldn't use cookies. Plus to go from Outer Rim to a Core World is way more expensive than an average Tattoine could afford
Ghost320 chapter 72 . 7/27/2017
Why they just go to the death star and kill Tarkin. This could be much more easier.
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