Reviews for Only Human
aconspiracytheory chapter 5 . 6/5/2008
It's really good!

I love the idea for this story.

Update soon :)
exiled.contessa chapter 5 . 6/5/2008
Bella's funny; and Edward so cute!

You are / Bella's a genius for coming up with the idea of finding Carlisle in that time and place! I hadn't even thought far enough ahead to guess that one; and I'm usually pretty good at predicting plot twists!

I continue to be excited about this story!

I just had a funny thought: What if human Edward eventually got Bella pregnant, and then she came back to her all knocked up? It's not like Edward could ever say the baby wasn't his! (I'm sleep-deprived and giddy right now. Forgive me.) And please, don't put a human baby in houseful of vampires! Thoughts like these are exactly why nobody should ever wish for me to write a story of my own.

Thanks for updating so often. Your fans DO appreciate it!
RockinWriter chapter 5 . 6/4/2008
You accidentally called the father, "Edward," in I think chapter 4.


And spill what that new thing in his eyes is.
Ciara chapter 5 . 6/4/2008
omgah, i LOVE this story so far;

please update soon! #$%(

RockinWriter chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
Did you say his mother was Esme? I forget. Because his mother wasn't Esme, so...
RockinWriter chapter 3 . 6/4/2008
Good call on the rings. I forgot about them.

So she's going to say that she's over whoever she supposedly left behind in Washington?

And she's going to make another wish and wish herself back to where she was or something, isn't she?
RockinWriter chapter 2 . 6/4/2008
I just hope you've researched what the early 1900's were like. I mean, I don't, but...

How could she possibly look like a man? Her hair, her shirt, her pants, her /chest/...
RockinWriter chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
That was a really, really good ending to the story. I applaud you wholeheartedly. :)

Lol, I always wonder if the authors of these M-rated fanfics are virgins. :P Like, how do they know so much?
Dark-Wiccan-Goddess chapter 3 . 6/4/2008
a decade? A decade is 10 years, which would be 1996, not 1918
KawaiiHonya chapter 5 . 6/4/2008
o really good so far! I am going to deff keep reading! i loves it.
sasuke678 chapter 5 . 6/4/2008
I haven't picked up on any plot holes, so far. I'm just totally jealous of your ideas. I wish I could come up with something so original and entertaining. Great job with this chapter! I really do enjoy everything. It keeps making questions in my mind and every time I see a chapter, I squeal. Thanks so much! I'll be looking for the next one!
SilverEmber282 chapter 5 . 6/4/2008
once again amazing chapter!

'nuff said.


keep it up!

Cyberchao X chapter 5 . 6/4/2008
Heheh, yeah, time travel can do that...
Whitney chapter 5 . 6/4/2008
Oh My! I hope that you keep adding to this story. There are few that Ive read, written by other people, who have stoped updating the good stories months ago. This one is really good! I couldnt take my eyes away from the screen just so I could find out what happened next. Its the same reaction I had to Twilight itself. I couldnt keep my nose out of that book. haha, please update again.
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 5 . 6/4/2008
I love this! so much! it is very good and I can't wait for more so please please update soon!
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