Reviews for Torture
Alice Cullen 1534 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
love it
Isabell89 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
This is /good/. Wow. Normally all of those 'first time' stories (no matter how far they actually go in their 'explorations') are either completely too tame (lol) or slightly over the top.

I loved this. You found a great middle ground. Might be the fact that I like myself a confident Edward; I don't really like seeing him all insecure. Even though he doesn't have too much experience, I just don't picture him as totally clueless and shy and this was a perfect representation of how I imagine he'd... ah, let's say approach things ;-)
bellamarie chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
m... so hot
Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
That was great!
Eliph95 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
nice..tottally something edward wuda done to human bella..though one can imagine..lol
tuhkakoti chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Nice! If only the real Edward had been so generous.

Vampire sex is hot. Seriously.
missesmuhlachee chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
omg, i want one. theres nothing else that needs to be said!
MeiSun chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
This was sweet and sexy.

And the disclaimer was hilarious! :)
xAutumnSkyex chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
"M'kay…am I the only one who wished he was licking me?" *fans self* Ohmy... room is spinning tilt-a-whirl style *melts in a puddle of saliva*

keep writing this lemony good stuff!
Cullenary chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
All I have to say is HOLY EFFIN SMOKES! Need more of that! WOW! She needs to play dirty and get back at him now...
NeverThink chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
M

EVEN THOUGH THIS IS A ONE SHOT

WILL WE EVER SEE WAT THE TORTURE WILL BE LIKE?
MarchHare5 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
Beautiful.
deleted44444444444444 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
WOW amazing smut! :-D Really thought that was good, hope ytou write more!
OneEclecticMess chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
I was blushing myself reading that one.
Twilight2121 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
i have noticed yhoo have quite a dirty mind nearly all of yhoor twilight stories so far have had sex in hemm
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