|Reviews for Torture|
| Samara Cuenta Cuentos chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
You're absolutely awesome. I love your stories. All of them.
| AMYCULLENCRUSHED chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
You should make a sequel to this one about the torture ;D
| Alice Cullen 1534 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
| Isabell89 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
This is /good/. Wow. Normally all of those 'first time' stories (no matter how far they actually go in their 'explorations') are either completely too tame (lol) or slightly over the top.
I loved this. You found a great middle ground. Might be the fact that I like myself a confident Edward; I don't really like seeing him all insecure. Even though he doesn't have too much experience, I just don't picture him as totally clueless and shy and this was a perfect representation of how I imagine he'd... ah, let's say approach things ;-)
| bellamarie chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
m... so hot
| Romance and Musicals chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
That was great!
| Eliph95 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
nice..tottally something edward wuda done to human bella..though one can imagine..lol
| tuhkakoti chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Nice! If only the real Edward had been so generous.
Vampire sex is hot. Seriously.
| missesmuhlachee chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
omg, i want one. theres nothing else that needs to be said!
| MeiSun chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
This was sweet and sexy.
And the disclaimer was hilarious! :)
| xAutumnSkyex chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
"M'kay…am I the only one who wished he was licking me?" *fans self* Ohmy... room is spinning tilt-a-whirl style *melts in a puddle of saliva*
keep writing this lemony good stuff!
| Cullenary chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
All I have to say is HOLY EFFIN SMOKES! Need more of that! WOW! She needs to play dirty and get back at him now...
| NeverThink chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
EVEN THOUGH THIS IS A ONE SHOT
WILL WE EVER SEE WAT THE TORTURE WILL BE LIKE?
| MarchHare5 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
| deleted44444444444444 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
WOW amazing smut! :-D Really thought that was good, hope ytou write more!