Reviews for Closer
YummyYamanaka chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
I SO wish this part was in the book. ;(
cinemapersians chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Wonderful! I can only wish that THIS had been the conclusion of "Eclipse". Sorry, SM, but this ending is MUCH better!

You did such a great job. A lovely lemon without being gross about it. You know what I mean, I hope.
romeosjuliet14 chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
love it once again so good.
Captain Obvious chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Would you look at that. That place where their bodies are joined again. Tut, tut. I thought we were done with that. Apparently not. I just realized something. Bats will forever turn me on...starting now...
portalefiamme chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
very very very very beutifull... you do a grath job! i love you story!
LoveAngel91 chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
beautiful! luv ur stories!
Miss Snazzy chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Man I wish Eclipse had turned out this way. Lol. Another good story that was really in canon. You certainly have a knack. )
ladyglaukopis chapter 1 . 2/5/2010

I totes giggled at that part. Nice smut!
AllisCullen chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I love this. I think I love you!

How do you write dialogue so easily? When I write, it's like two Neanderthals pounding their chests...

Awesome job, lady!
Iceblondie chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Awe they did not wait. hehehehe

Very nice in the spot and being then married there. Love it.
PleaseDeleteAccountPLEASE19282 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
WithoutLove.LifeIsLike chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Cute! I love when Edward gives in. It really was only a matter of time! :)
soton chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Wow - really loved this! ;D

I don't think Bella could have resisted Edward once he turned on the "dazzle" - this just seemed so right. Thank you.
SigningOff chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
See this is why I don't read Twilight fanfiction often!

It gets too incredibly real, too well written!

Or maybe it's not real enough, because my chances of find a guy like Edward nil.

I'm contradicting myself now, see, your wonderfully written story has befuddled me to pieces.

I need a cold shower now.

tite-lilith chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
so funny! "his bat-covered boxers" Alice made the right decision lol

“You are far too coherent – I must not be doing this right.” Hum hum lol

so sweet! "Please “Don’t hide from me.”

lol “We should probably tell Charlie. “Well, not this part, but that we’re getting married. He needs to know.”

I love it!

Thank you!
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