Reviews for Little Lies
thesunshineblues chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
really lovely
Aurora chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
Beautiful
Blairx6661 chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
I thought this was pretty good, and I enjoyed reading it :)

xxx
Elf Lord Dobby chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Nice, question everything. Loved it.
Bri2daAnne chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
you kno this really is a great story :) i really like it but i was just curious, wat was ur inspiration? im only asking because it sounds an awful lot like my childhood :) almost down to a T. i was just curious though, plz leave me a reply if you dont mind. (btw im not a stupid teeeny-bopper or whatever, my spelling and typing choices are wat they are due to my chronic impatience & laziness) :)
Isolde136 chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
I don't read slash... but for some reason I read this and I liked it! wow.
David Fishwick chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Cool and thanks for writing.
thebrunetteone chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
I'm not a fan of femmeslash AT ALL, but I really enjoyed this! For once, Daphne is the black sheep in the family, not little Astoria. Well-written :)
Shally-wa chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I read this a while ago, when I saw it on All Things Femmeslash. Seems I forgot to review, though.

This is a really cool fic. I love minor character femslash. And you develop their characters so well.

I think it would be really interesting if you expanded on this; made each lie a small chapter or something. Not that it would be in chronological order necessarily, but just so we could se more character development. Because it's a really cool fic.

This is companion to something in the works, though, so I could see that being redundant.

~Shally
msllamalover chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Brilliant! Pure Brilliance! Screw the sexist pigs and prejudiced parents! In this day and age a girl can be whoever and whatever she pleases! Caught the spirit of Daphne (as I want her to be, anyhow) wonderfully, and the writing was extremely good *favourites*
sunbeams chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I /loved/ this, being slightly feminist and all.

"but not know in this little hollow of truth behind the tapestry of lies that was everywhere. It did help, though that I wasn’t wearing anything but her."

Favorite line. Very Jeanette Winterson (who I adore).

Hope to read more!
WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
After whetting my appetite, I'm definitely checking out your larger Daphne Greengrass story. I've got a soft spot in my heart for Miss Greengrass too. And I love how you juxtaposed Daphne's rebellion/counterpoints to each of the lies that had been ingrained into her and were supposed to be a part of her blood. Her coming out, her experience with Slytherins, her point of divergence from the values held by her housemates and her family . . . this is all really powerful stuff.

Great job!
morte206 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Generally I don't enjoy list fics but this one was clever and detailed and lovely.

Thank you for sharing.
NickyFox13 chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Beautifully written with genius characterizations.

I'm glad you wrote about a literal name only character like Mandy Brocklehurst. She's interesting as there is no description of her, nothing.

I also love your characterization of Daphne. I like how she's questioning what her parents have taught her to believe in.

The only mistake I could find was that you put an extra "s" in the word "is" on Daphne's commentary on number nine. Other than that, your punctuation, spelling and grammar are flawless.

Keep writing.
Crina chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Love it! Your Daphne (and Mandy) are really interesting characters, and numbers 3, 7, 8 and 10 made me melt.

I'm really looking forward to The Greengrass Girls!
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