|Reviews for Little Lies|
| thesunshineblues chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
| Aurora chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
| Blairx6661 chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
I thought this was pretty good, and I enjoyed reading it :)
| Elf Lord Dobby chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Nice, question everything. Loved it.
| Bri2daAnne chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
you kno this really is a great story :) i really like it but i was just curious, wat was ur inspiration? im only asking because it sounds an awful lot like my childhood :) almost down to a T. i was just curious though, plz leave me a reply if you dont mind. (btw im not a stupid teeeny-bopper or whatever, my spelling and typing choices are wat they are due to my chronic impatience & laziness) :)
| Isolde136 chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
I don't read slash... but for some reason I read this and I liked it! wow.
| David Fishwick chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Cool and thanks for writing.
| thebrunetteone chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
I'm not a fan of femmeslash AT ALL, but I really enjoyed this! For once, Daphne is the black sheep in the family, not little Astoria. Well-written :)
| Shally-wa chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I read this a while ago, when I saw it on All Things Femmeslash. Seems I forgot to review, though.
This is a really cool fic. I love minor character femslash. And you develop their characters so well.
I think it would be really interesting if you expanded on this; made each lie a small chapter or something. Not that it would be in chronological order necessarily, but just so we could se more character development. Because it's a really cool fic.
This is companion to something in the works, though, so I could see that being redundant.
| msllamalover chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Brilliant! Pure Brilliance! Screw the sexist pigs and prejudiced parents! In this day and age a girl can be whoever and whatever she pleases! Caught the spirit of Daphne (as I want her to be, anyhow) wonderfully, and the writing was extremely good *favourites*
| sunbeams chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I /loved/ this, being slightly feminist and all.
"but not know in this little hollow of truth behind the tapestry of lies that was everywhere. It did help, though that I wasn’t wearing anything but her."
Favorite line. Very Jeanette Winterson (who I adore).
Hope to read more!
| WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
After whetting my appetite, I'm definitely checking out your larger Daphne Greengrass story. I've got a soft spot in my heart for Miss Greengrass too. And I love how you juxtaposed Daphne's rebellion/counterpoints to each of the lies that had been ingrained into her and were supposed to be a part of her blood. Her coming out, her experience with Slytherins, her point of divergence from the values held by her housemates and her family . . . this is all really powerful stuff.
| morte206 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Generally I don't enjoy list fics but this one was clever and detailed and lovely.
Thank you for sharing.
| NickyFox13 chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Beautifully written with genius characterizations.
I'm glad you wrote about a literal name only character like Mandy Brocklehurst. She's interesting as there is no description of her, nothing.
I also love your characterization of Daphne. I like how she's questioning what her parents have taught her to believe in.
The only mistake I could find was that you put an extra "s" in the word "is" on Daphne's commentary on number nine. Other than that, your punctuation, spelling and grammar are flawless.
| Crina chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Love it! Your Daphne (and Mandy) are really interesting characters, and numbers 3, 7, 8 and 10 made me melt.
I'm really looking forward to The Greengrass Girls!