... Malefor is insane... that's all I have to say...

the third and second to last paragraphs were wierd, but the second to last doesnt mention sex, just implies

no offense but in this cahpter you sounded like a pervert

Ok i haveread it and it was somthing hehe all of it was cool and funny and sad and OH my gosh! awsome job!

thats got to hert like hell and f**k combined LOL

p.s

if anyone who is a member reads this revew tell the true crossover king IF HE DOSN'T CONTINUE THE SPYRO AND HEROS STORIES I WILL STAB HIM THOUGH THE HEART RIP OUT HIS INTESTINES AND STRANGLE HIM WITH THEM STAB HIM THOUGH THE LUNGS AND CUT OUT HIS MOTHER F*ING HEAD

2 wards OH SH*T

HOLY SH*T IMAGINE HOW MUTCH THAT LECLICE WOULD BE WEARTH

man i did not see that comeing

THANK FOR THE ADVICE WHAT'S YOUR FACE LOL

WTF IS WITH LEON THAT GAY IDIOT IF HE KNOWS IT'S WONG WHY DOES HE STILL ACT GAY

Leon: i hope spyro is gay

Spyro: I HEARD THAT (shoots a fire ball at leon LOL)

THE DARK MASTER IS ONE SICK SON OF A B**CH IF HE WAS HERE I WOULD GRAD A NEARBY SWEARD STAB HIM THOUGH THE HEARTS THOUGH THE LUNGS AND CUT OFF HIS F*ING HEAD

carrection it's dark spyro not evil spyro

let me guss the perple dragon was falzar

hears a move that i think cynder acan use i call it life sucker a dark power that literaly takes the life out of anyone cynder chooses i persanaly hope she usees it on sparx