Reviews for The Fall of Konaha!
thegrison chapter 1 . 6/13/2021
Yea not my kind of story. Way too many plot holes and errors that kill it. The 4th can not do broufht back until his soul is released from the death gods stomach using the death mask in the Uzumaki temple. Sasake could not kill Gaara without releasing the 1 tails then and there.
thegrison chapter 3 . 3/1/2020
Just No. So many things wrong with this story. Plot holes are everywhere. Try again this time fix the huge plot holes.
Guest chapter 23 . 5/2/2019
Man u should atleast made hinata hit temari..you know like use her ability or something
treeseven chapter 5 . 7/17/2017
Konaha? Konkuro? Kimimaru? MMMMhhh...
246vili chapter 5 . 10/10/2016
So only the seven of them got out of Konoha (one not even in her own body) besides a few others who will most likely appear later? For one, Jiraya is supposed to be alive, protecting the top secrets of Konoha and the clans, right?
246vili chapter 3 . 10/9/2016
Man, people are dying pretty fast left and right. I wonder who will survive in the end.
Uraharaisgod chapter 34 . 9/14/2012
That's odd, you haven't made a single mention of Sasori's poison for Chouji. He should have been completely incapacitated far before the end of the battle from the poison, yet he's not even been affected, odd...
Uraharaisgod chapter 30 . 9/14/2012
Ho, the Kazekage refused to join the fight against Pein, despite apparently being described as still having *soft* eyes, indicating a pure individual, rather than a nasty charecter? Lemme just throw a shot out in the dark, but what are the chances he refused to fight because he is one of the so far unnamed Jinchuuriki, possibly the seven tails? That would explain his reluctance to fight Pein despite being from a country that is pro-destruction of Akatsuki, since he would reveal his hidden identity if he did to no less than the leader of Akatsuki, so he refused to fight so Pein wouldn't realise he was actually walking AWAY from a Jinchuuriki.
The SnKo chapter 4 . 8/22/2012
i speak for everyone who feels the way about sakura that i do when i say that i am truly sad about her death... i mean couldn't you have had it be more pain ful like seriously this is what people should do when contemplating killing sakura google the most gruesome tortures i didn't have to because im awesome
Idk chapter 12 . 11/13/2011
Yugito is the container of the two tailed cat Nibi. I'm not sure who the container ofthe six tailed slug is, but the eight tails is a ox and, Killer Bee, the raikages brother is the container for hachibi.
d unknown chapter 36 . 11/22/2010
Dude this story toally rockz make more chapters please man im begging ya!
deathleader chapter 36 . 6/18/2010
Why do you hide the next chapter from us plz put it up soon!
HeartsDragon chapter 14 . 1/18/2010
this is a really good story! wow i absolutely love it~ 3

yay NaruHina- 3

i hope to see more fluffy moments in the future~ they're such a cute couple!
marvolo-madara chapter 25 . 1/17/2010
you have been spelling the leaf villages name wrong, it IS Konoha, NOT Konaha
Namikazelil chapter 36 . 5/29/2009
WHOO! awesome chapter! Man its so painfully obvious that Akatsuki would take advantage of the Kages practically bringing them the remaining jinchuriki, why can't anyone but Sasuke see that? lol Can't wait to see how naruto and co are gonna handle the 'earthshaker' lol.

please update soon!
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