Reviews for Finding a Mother
Wheels4TheOneTrueGod chapter 15 . 7/28/2009
I absolutly loved this story. It was ike an episode. I could hear everyone speaking. The only thing I didn't like was the foul language - other than that, it was a terrific story with a wonderful plot.

P.S. - Katara would have been 114, not 112, when she died.
xxxZutaraxxx chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
This is a great story! You should definatly write more like this!
Hell Changer chapter 9 . 12/15/2008
Who are Chey, Gansu and Sela? I don't remember!
Punks 13 chapter 15 . 9/5/2008
that was a good story i like how hes son was named iroh
amaya no shiori chapter 15 . 8/31/2008
What really made me like this story was how you portrayed Hakoda, who I will admit is one of my favorite characters. I especially loved his interaction with Zuko and how he takes the initiative to understand and eventually support Zuko. Honestly, the most memorable parts for me were the first 3 chapters of the fic.

I am sad that Toph and Iroh died when they did, but that does add a unique twist that most authors for some reason seem to avoid. It is a war and people die.

Overall, the reading the fic was an interesting experience. You tied things up rather nicely in the epilogue.

I don't particularly like Zutara, a fact I blame on the countless number of poorly done fics with the couple. However, this was rather well written and I found myself liking the story despite the pairing.

So, I just want to say, well done and thank you for sharing it.
Darkness's Daughter chapter 15 . 7/20/2008
tht waz so sad i feel like crying now -sniff-...i liked the waz kinda short u kno the chapters were short but it waz i am off 2 go cry

PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 15 . 7/15/2008, he's old. And he gave the tea shop to Jin? How sweet is that? Poor Suki. Poor Sokka. Poor Hakoda. I bet Katara was heart broken. 212? Now that's really old! I bet Zuko would be a great father. I think the sweetest part was that he named his eldestson after his Uncle/adoptive father. Awesomely epic story.
PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 14 . 7/15/2008
Great chapter. Aw, finally a kiss. He earned it.
PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 13 . 7/15/2008
Poor Toph. Way to go Ursa! Yeah, Girl Power! Hahaha! Long Feng defeated by a flying bison!
PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 12 . 7/15/2008
Is Toph really going to die in the finale? If so, that sucks. Typical older brother, picking on the little sister (I would know) but she does deserve it. Ooh, bloodbending...interesting. Ozai's an idiot for thinking Zuko would help him after everything he did.
PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 11 . 7/15/2008
Whoa, Azula has truly lost it...Awesome! Ooh, what's the crazy princess gonna do now? One question: How did Appa carry all those people? Wouldn't they have gone back for the war balloon? Aw, what Iroh said about Lu Ten was sweet. Not Iroh! Was that in the spoilers? I know about the Zutara hug and Zuko being shot by lightning. What else is there?
PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 10 . 7/15/2008
Aang's not going to chicken out when it comes down to it, is he? Now what I expected of Ozai, but it seemed like him. Joo Dee is so creepy.
PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 9 . 7/15/2008
Yay! Uncle Iroh's back! But...what's he gonna think of Zuko? I can't believe Katara said she was sorry...wait, yes I can!
PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 8 . 7/15/2008
Which episode does she snap in, again? I can't wait to see that! I am an official Azula hater. Way to go Suki! I do hate the girl, but I think it's funny when she calls Zuko 'dumb-dumb'. Poor Mai, poor poor poor Zuko and of course poor Ty Lee. I actually liked the pink circus freak.
PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 7 . 7/15/2008
I wish I could see that smile. Zuko is a traitor, bt only to the Fire Nation. Wait, now Zuko's gotta worry about how both Ursa and Katara are going to react to his actions. That sucks for him. He KILLED the guy! That's not like him at all...but...with Mai on his mind, who wouldn't think about killing?
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